oh my goshness! that was so sweet! soo faving!

Very cute! The phrase 'doing the same' may not have been exactly what you were going for in the story, but it worked. The only other phrase I could think of was 'brushing back' but that would've sounded like a personal grooming session using hairbrushes!

I love the Izumi/Meroko pairing, so I really liked this one!

Fwee! Cute, cute, cute! xD I'm slowly becoming a sucker for Izumi/Meroko fics, and this was a very, very sweet short-fic.

So cute. It's simply adorable! This is so sweet!

o sweet ( izumero fanfiC.. cute ( i like your integration of jap as well, works very well in this context.. hehe very well done!

its short but sweet. write another fanfiC! looking forward to another one of your works.. ~aishiteruze

This was a nice fanfic n_n I do think you could've extended it just a little bit. I'm looking forward to another fanfic by you!

This was good! So good putting the Japanese into the story as well.

... I love you you for you have written an IzuMero fic and I have been searching for one for so long. I thank you.

i like the part when Izumi and Meroko kiss!