I only review the best stories. It was well written and entertaining

thanx . I had a great time readin it _

Your portrayals of Naruto and Hinata are spot on. Your choice of words and delivery are exceptional as well. To be able to convey so much in just 7k words is amazing.

It's an absolute shame that it stopped at 5 chapters, though. It's left me so wanting that I've been trying to find stories with a similar premise, but they are few and far in between, and they aren't anywhere near the level of artistry you've displayed here.

It's been almost a decade, but here's to hoping you find your way back here and maybe expand on this some more.

This is it? Really? Is over? But the story was just beginning! You left so many questions un resolved.

Well really believable, every one is in character. I was really looking forward for a interaction between those two, but it was way to short.

Solo yeah I get that Naruto is in "probation" or something but, what happens with his work as ninja?

Really nice. Hinata's letter was so sweet, and just so her, although she always says "Naruto-kun"
Haha is so Naruto-like not to know the meaning of kanji. Really good.

I found a little abrupt the change between every scene. But I'm looking forward for the next chapter, and to know what happens next so, good job.

Good work

Is that all?

It's sad that you stopped here...I was hoping that it would go up to the wedding anyway. You have a superb story started here...I would love to read the continuation. Thanks for writing.

Super chapter and Naruto/Hinata interactions...very sensitive...good writing:)

I loved the chapter. Naruto is SO much like he is supposed to be here...and no matter what happens Hinata remains steadfast in her love and devotion to him.

Wonderful idea of Hinata writing a letter to Naruto. Well done.

What a great first chpt...your presentation of Hinata and Naruto here are very effective...both of them are so much like they manga characters. Sweet chapter.