Oh, man, Briar really should have known Evvy better by now. Great epilogue!

I like it

It is so sad. I am so close to crying. But that is also why I love it so much. This is amazing!

THATT was really cute are you going to do anything with Tris and Keth cause you hinted at it in one of the chapters?

Oh, my... that was fantastic. And I enjoyed every second spent reading it.

WRITE THE EPILOGUE.

for some reason i revised the line
"The mighty Pahan Evvy scared of a green boy's kiss?""
in my head to read
"The mighty Pahan Evvy scared of a stone-killer's kiss?"
XD

please write an epilogue! i loved this story! extend its life just a little bit, please?

*shudders, then laughs* Oh, imagine the stubbornness of their future children... XD

"I've made a huge mistake". hahaha. Oh Arrested Development. Well done. I'm glad you're finally finishing this. You own it to yourself. :) Good job!

i liked this another good chapter and i am so glad that you started this up again. most of the ones i have read the authors have just stopped writing on them and its hard to find a good one that is complete or atleast still being worked. so thank u

Well played, my friend. :) This was quite well done. I can only applaud your dedication and skill. I'm 21, reading my best friend's fanfiction and I don't care.

Plz update soon I want to know what happens

Please write another chapter! And also pls make sure briar lives

Please write another chapter! And also pls make sure briar lives

Arrgh! update! This is the worst freaking cliff hanger ever seen in fanfic! Update or I will go insane!

-Dyslexic Nerd

P. S. Please?

nice story. I love it.