wow, that was amazing, and deep, and powerful. And beautiful too. I love the discription of the veil in the begining and I think you really have a way with emotion and words. Bravo...

...Have a cookie...

~TheTrioLivesOn

was it saposed to make make people cry? because it made me cry. in a good way. thank u for writing this, it was wonderful!

...Beautiful. I have to say. This story is...if nothing else...beautiful. The imagery...jeez. Amazing job, and usually I'm not so easily impressed. This is a beautiful fic.

Wow, its heart-wretching. It was fantastic, poor poor Remus, no one is ever there for him...*sniffles* props to you, that was very good.

That was gorgeously done. The whole atmosphere of the piece was haunting and terrible. The image of Remus just watching Sirius fall and how it doesn't end in death is ... horrible and terrifying.

Very, very well done. (BTW, am her via FA's Slash Exchange).

This was a excellent, heartbreaking story. Very poetic and very heart-wrenching. It makes that part of OotP seem even more wrenching. I'm a sucker for sad, dark tales and I give you a gold star for a beautiful little tale. The grammar as a whole was appropriate to the story, flowing, if a bit long on sentences. Good, solid work. My favorite line is: "...See that boy with the broken smile?" Only now this statement is just a appropriate for Harry as it is poor Remus.

I always feel bad for Remuse and you have done it beautifully. Great writing style.

(nipping in from the FAP fic exchange)

Good God, that was beautiful. I love the imagery. All the little instances and memories woven together into one. It was sensual, and poetic and poignant.

I like that you use the present tense, even for the past memories, as if Sirius is living them for the first time. And I really commend you for describing the world that exists (or does not exist) beyond the veil. Sounds kind of lke hell to me. I wouldnot wish it upon the worst of my enemies.

Thanks for offering this fic on the exchange.

Manraviel

What a painfully beautiful story. My god this is one of the best written Remus/Sirius stories I've ever read (and I've read many). This is goin on the fav stories list. Amen.

Oh... *shivers*

Angsty and creepy and deep and very, very, very good. Wow. *shivers again*

aahh. that's reallyreally sad. ;_; lovely and beautiful, but sad!

Wow. That was so...deep. Angsty. *shivers*

I read it out loud, 'cause I'm weird and want to make it all dramatic sometimes and to practice my speaking skills, and...it was hard to do. There was so much emotion.

Excellent job!

Beautiful, but oh so sad. *sniffle*

Im Sirius's wife, I don't approve of the pairing here, my hunny is perfectly straight!

Ooh... shivers... that was good. Good take on the veil.