| Reviews for Outer Demons or possibly inner as well |
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emily g chapter 6 . 12/5/2004 great end to the story, and i can't wait till ur next charmed fanfic |
futuregirl05 chapter 5 . 11/28/2004 thanx for updating, hope you update soon passions |
windowpane chapter 5 . 11/28/2004 Very nice, I must say. Ho Ho. Now for the yelling. YOU BETTER FINISH THIS STORY, YOUNG LADY! GETTING BORED IS NOT AN EXSUSE. If you don't I'll get really sad and never stop bothering you about it. You wouldn't want that would ya now...hee.. |
windowpane chapter 4 . 10/9/2004 Oddly when I read that chappy I could hear you in my head narrating it! Hehe I know I'm odd. Anyways I loved this chapter and I DON'T want to wear a tutu either. UPDATE AGAIN AND SOON! |
Succubus-69 chapter 4 . 10/8/2004 Hehe, this is funny and cool :) I don't know why i find it funny; maybe it's just the fact that they have weird thoughts :P But nevertheless, it's still good! Oh, and poor Paige. I hated vomitting, and my poor sister would have to clean up too :) Haha, yah. Phoebe is really nice! Quite different to the Phoebe I see on the actual show :O lolz, so i like your Phoebe better ;) Oh, and how are they going to rescue Piper? Seeing as our Paige is pretty out of it :O. Well, i trust to you to come up with a plausible explanation :D |
HarleyStitches121 chapter 4 . 10/8/2004 bloody hell! (sorry about that) UPDATE SOON! |
scrawn chapter 4 . 10/8/2004 oh finally an update! its gettin good! and im hopin that, as a loyal reviewer, u will satisfy me and update again a lot sooner this time! :-D |
Dark-Aura13 chapter 3 . 9/29/2004 yes, i kinda weird reveiwing to ur own story. i just wanted to say that the 4th chapter will be up soon. its almost finished.(it will be longer than the last) |
HarleyStitches121 chapter 3 . 9/28/2004 UPDATE! UPDATE NOW! ...please? |
acid rain 13 chapter 3 . 9/11/2004 Lol! I am verry happy you listend to me and made her say the 98 poinds thing out loud! Lol! This is one of your best pieces of work by far! |
windowpane chapter 1 . 9/11/2004 loved it. I hope pheboe and piper kick that stupid demons ass! And with you as the author I bet they will! ROCK ON ASH! |
Succubus-69 chapter 3 . 9/11/2004 For some reason, some parts in Phoebe and Piper's P.O.V made me laugh - Don't worry, it's not a bad thing cause I could do with a laugh since all I've been writing lately is Angst! AH! OH, i wonder where Piper went? Hehe, Paige puked all over herself; that's funny :D Hmmn, well hope you continue soon :) |
scrawn chapter 3 . 9/11/2004 yay u updated! do it again! :-D |
contradictions41 chapter 2 . 9/9/2004 Loved it! Very cool. |
scrawn chapter 2 . 8/28/2004 im really wanting you to continue this. so. please do! :) |