loved it! Kind of depressing though. It makes me wonder if Atlantis really will come to a horrific end. It was short and sweet, just the way I like them!

Pretty interesting idea. You're the first person I've known that killed off everyone in a series in a fanfic. But it was good, besides all of them dieing of course.

Oh wow... this is remarkebly sad... and yet... powerful in a way I can't describe.

Everything seems to make since, and blend together and its so well written... I can't say I've never seen a better story, but I don't think I've ever seen such a strong short story.

Please, keep up with the good work!

Ookami Terra Demona

Whoa, that was sad. I could almost feel O'Neill's horror and grief. Very well written. Reminds me of something from "There But For the Grace of God".

Yay! I love this! Snaps for you! : )

Now I'm depressed. Which means it was very good. Poor everyone. I need some chocolate now...

That was... deep. And rather sad. Interesting.

That was frightening...

There were some spelling errors - but the plot was interesting. Thanks.