| Reviews for Different Shades of Grey |
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   nequam-tenshi chapter 1 . 2/7/2010 cute! |
| KennyxButtman chapter 1 . 6/12/2007 Very kawaii. Hmm, I wonder why Enzan's going to Netto's and I know it's not just the umbrella. :] I loved it x3. |
| checkprofile4newaccount chapter 1 . 4/24/2006 yay! wuv the story ) plz make another chapter though its a one-shot. |
| kiiru chapter 1 . 9/3/2005 I'd say write a second chapter... But that was absolutely perfect! Then again... Write a second chapter! : ) |
| yllom21 chapter 1 . 7/23/2005 That was so cute! I loved it! Excellent job! |
| Rose Kitsune.EXE chapter 1 . 7/3/2005 In this world, there is no a absolute good, or absolute evil, therefore: there is no white, and no black...unless it's Enzan's hair. *Dies of laughter* *Is ressurected as undead* Write on! Or I will drag you down to the seventh circle of Hades! Were fluff IS BANNED FOR ALL ETERNITY! *Sobs theactrically* |
| prettypriestess chapter 1 . 6/18/2005 sequel? please? i'll give u chocolate! the fic was so kawaii! |
| Freaky Person O.o chapter 1 . 3/27/2005 sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! |
| Nanashio chapter 1 . 10/30/2004 Gasp, an Enzan/Netto! Love it! I love the pairing! If only there were more! Ah well, this was great! I love it! So cute! _ excellent writing, I envy you! I shall add to favorites for its rarity ; |
| Yuki chapter 1 . 9/26/2004 SPREE!(Don't ask)I love this story! It's one of my favortie Enzan/Netto stories! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2004 THIS WAS A STORY! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL OR SOMETHING! _ |
| Ignis-chan chapter 1 . 8/24/2004 Footnotes are useless if you use them for random fangirl babbling or what you were thinking at the moment you were writing the fanfiction. However, they're useful if you use them for what they're meant to: to provide the reader with further information towards the terms you just used - say, japanese terms, references you might've made to books or shows or games or whatever - and not using it with random babbling that won't help the author at all. Grammar check, good. Can't say a thing towards the pairing, I have the bad habit of staying neutral on this kind of fanfics. :P |
| Heliotropium chapter 1 . 8/24/2004 *Kuriboh squeal* Chu~! Kawaii desu, chuu~ Addressed to "Pan": Shut up, footnotes actually help people sometimes. The characters ARE in character, just tweaked a little. Besides, why WOULDN'T Netto kiss Enzan? It wasn't like he jumped him and used tounge or anything. Back to the fic in general... It's very cute, the cutest thing I've read since July. I take it that it takes place right after the first Shademan thing, right after the annoying "FIND THE INVISIBLE BATS" thing in EXE 4. I suggest putting a little translation near what Japanese words you used for those who don't know a single word of the language. |
| Yamiyashi nonexistent for the moment chapter 1 . 8/23/2004 Kind of pointless, but I noticed way fewer grammar mistakes than other stories. Funny here and there, and good if you learn to ignore the numbers. |
| Pan chapter 1 . 8/22/2004 *groans* Why, why do people do this? Do you believe your fanfic will be any better if you add distracting little numbers leading to inane notes that no one really cares about? Well, think again. No one cares about your ramblings; they just want to read the fanfic. Do yourself a favor, take out the notes and those irritating little numbers, get a livejournal, and rant about it there. And next time keep the characters IN character. Enzan is the last person Netto would kiss; sorry, but it's true. |
