Also I love your work but how did Sirius pick Severus up by the waist I’m trying to image it like is he picking Severus up and holding him away from his body or is Sirius not thinking and holding him close

What does “your Mother rides a toilet brush” mean and is it am Phras or somthing ?

omg suuuuuuuu guuuuuuuuuuuuddddddddddddd muuuuurrrrrrr pleeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzz

I love it. It was interesting to read it. I about cried for severus. I'm glad that sirius started to understand Severus. Poor darling. It was really good. Is it complete? It seemed like it, but I would love for it to be longer even after a lot of years since it's completion.

Last paragraph perfection

This is probably the best hp fanfic I have read... And I mean it. Keep it up!

I fail to see how not letting someone drown is a show of character. That's common decency... no not even that. It's what separates a normal person from a psychopath. Even if you do dislike them.

Dumbledore has some pretty low standards if he thinks that's a show of good character, especially since Sirius was the one to shove him in! XD

Severus is such a little cutie! Poor little thing though, that was horrible. And now to top it off, Sevy is sad and lonely again. *balls eyes out* No seriously, I was actualy crying. But, I also laughed at the funny parts too, so it maxes out. MAKE ENOTHER STOREY PLEASE! I loved this one and the Womping Willow incident one, I added both to my favorites! _ So, make another like it please. Please X 100,0,0,0 ! *puppy-dog eyes*

Wonderful story. And the things in the water were really disgusting.

Oh... That last paragraph had me sniffle! Really well done!

Sorrowful yet fulfilling. Yay.

Ah how sweet, evil, sad, etc story. If only Sev had one human-being friend. At least he had peace, for a moment. Good job.

Wow. I love it.

I like this...

Absolutely amazing. The plot was original, everyone was in character- very canon-oriented, very nice, very well-done. A ton of fun to read!

-Viskii :)