Oh my Ra, Yugi and Yami messing with Jou by finishing each other's sentences reminded me of the Weasley twins SO MUCH. I was laughing so hard.

Cool! this story is also super cool :)

Wow. Even though this story was written a long time ago. (I just started reading this a few days ago.) I got to say that it is very well put together. Yay, for Yugi-Yami cousinly love! Sometimes I get a little tired of the shipping going around.

I like how you go into depth on everyone's mental and emotional struggles. And the plot moves at an even pace. I don't feel like anything was rushed here.

However, it would be nice if you had elaborated on the characters' surroundings; like the background per example.

"Yugi heard the whistle of the arrow rather than saw the projectile as it bit into his cousin's shoulder staining his clothes red."

Or something about the garden they were in and Yugi being too upset to really take in the new surrounding as he marched to Yami.

I really love the series, I'm just being a brute who love to bathe in details. :)

Love this sequel just as much as the first part of it.

Well, I don't know if I exactly said what I liked about Vicious Circle in my last review: but what I really think is that it seems darker than Power of the Pharoah but it was good nonetheless. If it needs anything, it's the last piece to the puzzle, namely, the third story to this exciting trilogy. I've been checking your bio from time to time, and not to be um, a hassler or anything, but I hope you update soon.

i love this story plz hurry up with the next story!

This was a great finishe to the story I hope you get the sequel out soon because I can't wait to see what you have planned for the sequel.

Sheby: Er... that was... different... and-

Mera: -One heck of a twist on the plot and-

Sinya: -When will the sequel be up?

Sheby: Yeah, that's sort of-

Mera: -What we do all of the time-

Sinya: -As in finish each others'-

All: -Sentences.

All: Jinks!

All: Oh man!

All: Stop copying me!

[A/N: Funny huh?]

I have read both your stories twice already, and plan on reading them again after I forget what happens...great plots and writing...sequel please :D...the sooner the better...

Hi. This is a little strange, but I have been trying to get your e-mail, but the picture won't come up and my stupid address book puked it, so could you please e-mail me? I have a story that I would like to add to your archive.

hi!um...im 13,and i was wondering if i could take this plot,use my own characters,(since it has nothng to do with .)and i could change it a bit and enter it into a writing teacher said she would enter it for me if i could get it written it out on paper and have like 35 pages at the part where my character was kidnapped and the bad guy,or watever is talking to i can i would be extremely me at christmas_angel2009 with your email doesnt show up on your profile..._

You HAVE to write the next story! I'm hooked on your writing now! If you don't i'll become depressed... hehe anyway I loved the ending poor old Jou I hope 2 read more!

M.

Hi! Of course I loved this story. It was great! And you should feel bad about doing so many cliffhangers. It's those that kept reviewers (like me) to come back again and again to read more. Well, I'm glad this story had a happy ending. And it was funny as well. Yugi can be quite the michievous guy when he wants to be. And sometimes he can also be wise. Which is probably one of the reasons why Yami cares for him so much. It's a friendship thing. Anyway, keep up the good work. I really like you're writing style. Heh, well, Cya! _

Good ending, you definently have to make a third!

I think you should make a sequel to this. Because I loved Power of the Pharaoh and Vicious Circle was phenominal! I hope to see a sequel to this soon! See ya!