Great story! So detailed, much better than the PeterWendy fanfictions because they're all written for kids. Love it and please continue!

cute

I really love the series you have going here. even the way you're structuring it, really sucsinct and powerfull. they seem to whisper tidbits of wisdom in the same magical way as the original. From what you've stated you seem to be achieving you're objectives, please don't stop!

Wow, this fic is spooky in a good way. I really enjoyed that. Keep up the great work.

*growls* evil Daniel (Katherine's father) should know not to kill... me not like him...

...thou I liked the story. Poor Michelle, and Peter... no pity. only sadness...

I understandwhat he means with; ' "Michelle," he said, "Do you want to be a gymnast your whole life?" '

She died an' therefor she never stopped with gymnastic... right?

Wow, another wonderful piece of work from your collection. I seriously can't wait for the other three. For some odd reason I liked this better than "Pan's Shadow". Don't know why...

Still dark; but that's a good thing.

Keep it up,

Tia Ariel.

I am not sure if I get it or not , but I am guessing the blue pills are not pills at all.

I do not like this story, not because of your writing, but because it brings some awful memories to mind.

Thanks for the review, for all the people who told me "Aw soo cute," none caught the allusions (er, direct quotes, er whatever), it's a relief to find someone who actually read the book...

So, you think that part of Peter wants to grow up and that comes out in his dreams? Hmm, I always thought it was remorse, seeing as one of the only mentions that he had one of 'his dreams' was tbe night after he defeated Hook. Wendy being there to hold him, I always took as her comforting him and telling him he was in the right, that it was okay to kill. Peter and the rest of the boys had alarmingly little respect for human life and the dreams, I thought, were Peter's way of dealing with grown-up emotions (guilt) that in his waking life he didn't come to terms with.

Hehe, the blue pills reminded me of the Matrix...

Great plot bunny, keep writing.

-Cat

I like this. A lot.

One of the most well written Peter Pan fics I've come across thus far. It's very mysterious, but not so much though that it's frustrating. In fact, the suspense merely drew in more of my attention. I'd love to read more from you.

-BC

"...meant to expose and explore some of the darkness present in J. M. Barrie's book rather than simply ignore it for the sake of a cute plot." Finally! Someone who actually gets it!

So, help me understand; Michelle is stuck in a child's body? From the blue pills?

*adds story to favorites*

Oh my gosh it's a real story! I'm attempting not to die of shock. There are some real stories about, but I can honestly say I have never read the first chapter of any other fic before and been so disapointed that there aren't others yet. This is so interesting, with those pills and everything. Please please please keep writing.