I love this! Although there are a few grammar corrections and misspellings...If you have only corrected them, this fic would be much better!

Jou x Anzu rocks!

Love the fic!Keep it up!:)

I do like the idea behind this story, so please take this as a constructive review. (I totally found you off of a Pro Anzu LJ community I was checking out, so hi!)

First of all, J/A is interesting, and I think you pulled it off pretty well in character. I guess my major problem was that, from what little I've read of your writing, I feel that you have the potential to do better. Some little errors really distracted me from the whole. Misspellings, incorrect use of " vs ', some unclear phrasing...

Basically, what I'm suggesting is for you to give this story another read through. I have total and compete faith in your writing ablilities, and I know how exciting it is to finish a story, and how tempting it is to put it up without proofreading.

If you would like to email me, please feel free! My address is in my profile.

Once again, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, honest! In fact, I'm heading off to read the rest of your stories. As I said, you seem to be a promising writer.

I like this fic. :)

Do write more of this couple.

Awesome story! It was extremely kawaii! _ Keep up the good work!

~Blue-Kool-Aid~

I'm rather fond of the pairing Jounouchi/Anzu so I was thrilled that a fic like this existed- and such a well written one to boot! :) From start to finish I couldn't wipe the smile off my face. Keep it up!

This is so cute! I'm rather new to this couple myself. Keep writing!

Yay! JonouchixAnzu! This is SO going on my favorites.

Hey I loved your story! I twas very CUTE!-x

This was cute. Jounouchi/Anzu is a surpisingly rare couple, for how well they fit/how close they are. ::shrugs:: I liked how you kept mentioning how they were best friends. It was sweet.

Great job,

DSF

This was real cute. I love how Jou and Anzu interacted with each other and the snow. I love snow! lol I always thought that Jou and Anzu would make a cute couple, well cuter than Anzu and Yugi for some reason. Anyway, you did an excellent job! _

interesting...

not a common couple, but I like it.

good job.

An aorable set of scenes. I especially liked the way they acted and talked around each other, which was wonderfully in-character for both of them, and yet, at the same time, romantic in a dreamy kind of way. I love the style you used to write this ficlet. -

This was really cute, and had me smiling the whole way through. I think that Jounouchi and Anzu are adorable together. You have their personalities down well, and I love how casually you made them tease eachother. Great job.

Aww.. that was so cute! I love fluff! *Throws the fluff around* Great story! Anzu and Jou... how cute! Great job on this!