This is a really good chapter and so are the other ones! Great book! You are cool! I love your book it is great!

And you say here that this is your favorite chapter. I hate it when things like this happen.

I had to stop reading at this point. The story is good, but the execution is cringeworthy. I have been skipping paragraphs and skimming since the beginning, hoping for the dialogue and reactions to get better. Everything seems to fall in place too easily and everyone is acting cheerful and accepting of things. It’s just not believable. I would have preferred more truthful reactions (I.e Hermione acting more hurt and upset when Draco left her, Hermione not being as accepting when Draco finally does come back to her, Lucius cutting, or at least threatening to cut, Draco off). I couldn’t feel what the characters were feeling because everything wraps up too quickly and nicely. I am shocked there are more chapters...how much more of the story needs to be told? It seems like the climax has already happened (and was shockingly resolved without any hurt feelings, resentment, guilt, confusion, envy, anger, etc).

Enjoying this during quarantine-thank you!

Good story

Honestly this asking before kissing is getting a bit tiring..

I'm gonna need a brief back story on the girl who is frozen in the tundra? lol

Fun story, thanks!

OMG I was laughing so hard! Gosh if it were me I would have fainted! Hahahaha

Wow! Just gotta hold of this fanfic now and I'm enjoying the first chapter! Reading on... ;)

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Whhhhhhhhhhhhat is that the sequel ahh so excited for that. plsssssssssssssssss let me know

April Fool's Day wedding- I like it

nooOOOOOOOOOOO wHyyyyyyy

What if Draco Malfoy had saved Hermione from the troll in First Year, and not Harry and Ron..?

I don't have an account, so if ever you make a fanfic on this, please send credits to me, or just copy paste this review. I hope my idea will be put to use!

I love your fanfics, so much Dramione ) You improved over the years too.

️️️️lovveeeee