The whole Story is amazing and very moving.

Wow, great story! Love it! Thanks for sharing!

Is John Emo?

great story! Only one complaint. You have John talking it out with dad and each of his brothers, except for Alan. A fifteen year old kid found his older brother with a knife to his wrist and didn't need to talk to said older brother about it? This is not a flame, because I really liked the story. I just feel like you left Alan out of the healing process.

Hey. This is an amazing story, you had me in tears many times. I am so glad you wrote another chapter, I'm sucker for Gordon and John so having nearly an entire chapter for them was brilliant. Shame it had to end.

I must say, you're one of the few authors who remains true to the innocence of the Thunderbirds. You really get into their heads. Most fanfiction is the same no matter what story/movie/tv show it is but you really managed to create something...almost real. -!

Excellent work!

Man, I'm sorry about taking so long with this. Anyway, I love this ending a lot (like it better than the last one, though the other one would have been fine on its own). It really makes the story feel complete, because you've tied up all the problems and such. I'll really miss reading this - you've tapped into something really great. :)

Great wrap up! Now it feels complete. I hope you still write that other story, I am interested to read your alternate ending!

wo, more please! don't stop! don't ever stop!

last 2 chapter were great and if this is the end... ok, it rocks no matter what, but truth be told i'd like to see alan's reaction to the station. (we got scott's and john's reactions what about alan! :( ) love your writing, so keep it up!

The end? It certainly is a more fitting end, but I will miss this version of the story and characters.

uh...I am trying not to correct things anymore, but how is Virgil practicing the piano in the family room when he is on TB5?

I love Gordon's letter! But somehow, for me anyway, the story does not seem complete. Maybe to wrap this up (so you can write the next one, can't wait)you could include an epilouge chapter set a few months after his return, just so we know how he is doing?

I don't know if you should John get through his birthday or not. I think if you did, there would be something else that will probably make another chapter necessary...and then another chapter, etc. Maybe it is better to know that John appears to be coping, and his brothers are ready and waiting if there is ever a problem again.

Loved this chapter, Gordon's letter was so beautifully written I nealry had tears in my eyes. All i can say is 'Aw!'

I think this would be a great ending to the story though I don't want it to stop. Perhaps you could write a sequel?

Anyway, great fic!

Harumph. It's not letting me review chapter 17. Anyway, excellent couple of chapters! :) The interaction between Scott and John is lovely, and I also love Jeff's thoughts on the matter. It's too bad that he forgot about John's birthday, but I guess that it's expected given what was going on. Poor John, being teased because of writing poems - I wonder if he still writes them?

Anyway, kudos! Carry on. :D