will there be more?

hey omg i love your story i really hope you write more soon!

this was a good chapter.

cant wait until the next one.

Wow... that was short T_T... but i understand completely about writer's block. I had to re-cap a little on this fic but still enjoyed it greatly . Hope you add more. still lovers the Kael XD He's great no matter what anyone says..Damn Hojo T.T

wow...really this story is bookmarked i love it! please say you'll update! fabulous story

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I loved it keep going. real keep going.

Gr...I demand more! MORE! (in a nice way of course. XD)

aw... that was too short _-_ ah well. tis very good! They're on the beach... oh, romantic *wink wink nudge nudge* _ keep up the work

Dood, what other stories of yers are ya writing? O.o sorry. i don't usually remember what the name of the author is. Or the name of the story, for that matter. I remember some titles, but most of the time I read a title and then it's like, "of, that was THIS story!". Yeah.

*Squeals* GIMME MORE! *Coughs and chuckles* Sorry...just diggin' yer story like you wouldn't believe. D Keep up the greatness! _

*squeals* YAY! an update! *looks around shiftily as she has not updated her fics in a long time...* he he. vinnie's angry! oh dear! *slaps him* don't be angry with tifa, she only wants to help you meanie! ;p anyway, i' glad you updated! can't wait til the next one!

This story has been great so far! I think it's interesting how you introduced Kael and a few other characters. There were a few errors (like the end - "no need from promises". Should be "for promises") but there weren't too many. Keep it up! I'll be waiting for an update.

Though I liked the whole chapter, I thought the ending was the best. The best reply Vincent could give, IMHO. Thanks for the update. Keep it coming!

Nice to see an update! Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens. I love the interaction between the two brothers. Vincent's comment at the end here was nice, too. ;)

I think that it's a very good story, and it's very interesting!

I think that it's a shame that there's so much grammar, spelling and sentence-construction mishaps. It's really great and all, but the mistakes and such makes it a little more difficult to focus.

But, keep going, find a good BETA-reader and such, and in no time you'll have perfect grammar chapters. Anyhow, if you're in need of a BETA, ever, just email me, kay?