Daaamm, your story is so good, both of them. First, if you are there, I hope you are okay, one decade is king of worrying. And, if you are there, and if you are fine, would you please finish this?:c at least one more chapter, or let someone else finish it for you (although I's preffer your writting).

But well, I really enjoy reading this, and I am glad that tha 'last' chapter had a happy ending

I think it's sweet how you wound things down w/ such a sweet, almost-fluffy moment. I'm glad Faye's not a raging bitch anymore! For a moment i was almost hoping Joselyn really would hate her mom and break Faye's heart, that's how annoyed i was with Faye's selfishness.

Do you plan on finishing the story any time? Please do! I'd love to read the ending you come up with.

I'm a bit angry that you haven't finished this story yet. This is a pretty awesome story, besides even thought this story has nothing to do with him, I want to read more about Tobias. Awesome name by the way. Update soon! Please! Pretty Please!

~!*sesshomari*!~

Amazing story! Your characterization is just dead on. I hope to read more from you soon.

This is a very involved story. Wow. I did not think it would be so long! I love when the chapters and stories are long, because it is ususally indicative of a more complex plot. Which also typically means good grammar and sentence structure (I cannot read a poorly written, or spelled, story, even if it was the best plot since A Mid-Summer Night's Dream).

this story makes me smile. hope you post a new chapter soon

Hello!

How are you? :D I'm a spanish girl and I'm a great fan of your fics (specially:

Foreven Broken) and I want to ask you one question: Can I translate FB to

spanish? I began to translate it last night and I'll love to update it with

your approval, so it's why I ask you.

Anyway, I don't know if I have the right to ask you this.. but.. are you going

to drop your current fic? I love the secuel and it'll be a pity you don't

continue. So, please, go for it and make us happy with your exciting story!

Seriously, your fics rulz! And I want to say you it :D So, continue, continue,

continue, bc you have the talent, the manner and the touch. Faye and Spike are

the best on your hands. I love them. I love your fics. I want to read more about

them.

Please, come back with another chapter! We're waiting for you! :D

And, answer me, please, I REALLY want to translate it to spanish! (of course,

saying it's YOURS and all the show .)

See you soon! (I hope :D)

From Spain.

*Aliance*

PLZ update asap im still waiting

I really loved this chapter! update soon!

This was an amazing chapter! I love your fic and i can't wait to see how it will all end! UPDATE ASAP!

Omg! LOVE IT! There still be hope! ) We all know there will be a damned setback before all ends well but awesome!

Oh x_X AND THE TRUTH IS REVEALED

Omg! I am so not angry with you anymore! YES! YOU PUT AUDREY! Lmfao, I personally know a Joselyn and a Audrey, Hahah I own!

I hate when he misses the whole pregnancy, birth, years of life thing S Story's okay now and THE NAME! OH YEAH THE NAME! bLEH

X_X The Joselyn thing bothering her.

Damn they had so many close calls xS And its been soo long, it sucks