Poor Dee! lol

I really wanted to punch Bikky in the face when he came in when he did... :P

Great story, I love that you got the yaoi feel without any hard yaoi, and lets face it, I loved the idea of Dee helpless and Ryo taking command...Uke power!

I felt that you did a good job with the character, I just wish you could have drawn out the sexual tension of the stuck situation and little longer and tortured Dee, heh heh. I felt like you had some momentum going there.

Lol! THat's the funniest story I've read in a loong time! XD Dee got stuck in a window, and he didn't figure out that pictures were being taken of him! Haha. Ryo and Bikky are just too much sometimes P

I whole time I couldnt stop laughing. poor dee. lol

I loved it you kept them in character, the had numerous sex jokes and ryo being seductive. how much more could you ask for?

that was great it is so funny. im so glad i read it. Keep up the great work.

100% funny as all bloody hell. it was perfection as far as a fake fan fic gose * bows* nicely done

That was wicked and bloody hilarious!

Buttered Popcorn that's an idea I must heading to make myself too, after that it's only natural! Lovely story, the best I've read from these Fake-storys.

I hope that you're up to another round!

Well-written and humorous. I can tell you are passionate about your stories, and just passionate in general. haha ;) Keep up the good work, ladies. Dee and Ryo love you!

LOL. Thats the best fanfic ever! Now I'm in the mood for popcorn, lol! I love Bicky, he's just too funny! by the way, I think Dee is older than Ryo.

That was great. I enjoyed reading that.

LOL! XD that was a great laugh

i liked it..u shud do more of them type of things...they r well kwl!

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HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god! This fiction was so great! It had a fantastic balance of humor and shounen ai to yaoiness without it being yaoi! I loved this fiction! I wasn't having such a good day and this fiction really helped to brighten it up! Thank you so much! You did a wonderful job on this fiction! I love your writing style, its one that engages people without being too much in detail or straying too long, so fantastic job! Definatley keep writing and posting and I will continue to read! For your first FAKE fanfiction, this was fantastic! Most definatley keep writing! _

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god! This fiction was so great! It had a fantastic balance of humor and shounen ai to yaoiness without it being yaoi! I loved this fiction! I wasn't having such a good day and this fiction really helped to brighten it up! Thank you so much! You did a wonderful job on this fiction! I love your writing style, its one that engages people without being too much in detail or straying too long, so fantastic job! Definatley keep writing and posting and I will continue to read! For your first FAKE fanfiction, this was fantastic! Most definatley keep writing! _

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god! This fiction was so great! It had a fantastic balance of humor and shounen ai to yaoiness without it being yaoi! I loved this fiction! I wasn't having such a good day and this fiction really helped to brighten it up! Thank you so much! You did a wonderful job on this fiction! I love your writing style, its one that engages people without being too much in detail or straying too long, so fantastic job! Definatley keep writing and posting and I will continue to read! For your first FAKE fanfiction, this was fantastic! Most definatley keep writing! _