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rodriva443 chapter 16 . 5/30/2013
This is an amazing fan fiction story you should write more because your really good at it
Whyyyyyyy chapter 16 . 11/5/2012
Omg why you no update? : (
ForeverSirin chapter 16 . 2/26/2012
Hopefully you haven't given up on this story of yours. Hoping for an eventual update.
Daran chapter 16 . 8/28/2011
Praying for a miracle...hopeful this story will update someday
Hero Worship chapter 16 . 8/16/2011
I, alone with many other readers do have hope that someday this story will be updated. So please, don't give up on writing such a wonderful plot. We are all really anxious to know how you will wrap everything up, and now that Tohru has her memories again I really wonder how she will react upon seeing her son and husband again. Also, and what of Hatori? Since Tohru now remembers her love for him, and Akito specifically drilled in some shocking information into him. With all this going on, it just really make me want to read the next chapter even more.
angieyes chapter 16 . 10/7/2010
Gah! I need more! please please pleas please please finish this story! I'll be forever in your debt!
Hazelle.X chapter 16 . 6/19/2009
sigh...dear ms Heartless, sigh..you are indeed a little heartless... :( i know you might have to raise your child and all that...but this fic hasn't been updated in...3 years? can please update it? its really lovely and all...plus, you left a cliff hanger...haha...sigh...

update please? thanks for the chapters so far though ) God bless you.

-Misa.
Hazelle.X chapter 13 . 6/19/2009
ohmygosh. wow.

-Misa.
Hazelle.X chapter 9 . 6/19/2009
hey, i haven't even read finish this chapter, but as i read it, i felt a tingling sensation in my heart. sigh...Tohru's a dear thing. thanks again for this fic! D

-Misa.
Hazelle.X chapter 7 . 6/19/2009
sigh...i'm overflowing in happiness as i read to this point of your fic...Tohru is so wonderful! D i feel like she's so blessed. and her blessings will overflow into the Sohmas' lives...haha. thank you so much for the chapters so far! D

-Misa.
layafel chapter 16 . 7/31/2008
Wow. This is such a deep, well thought out story, full of complicated twists and turns. I like how your oc's are all given their own unique traits and flaws that make them blend straight in with the characters of furuba. One question: are Tohru's husband's eyes green or brown? Because you start of with her son having her emrald eyes, but later on in the story there is a reference to Hatoshi as having emerald eyes, which threw me off.

Can't wait for next chappie.
Lilyblue chapter 16 . 7/29/2008
Hi,

just to let you know I've been hunting around for this fic for nearly a week. By chance I finally found it. i was wondering are you still writing this? I'm just curious as to whether there were any plans to continue this or if it would be on permanent hiatus/or abandoned.

Either way, I really liked this story. It definitely peaked my interest at its potential.
Stacie chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
o! Do u know when u will have the next chapter? I can hardly stand it! I'm going to combust in the aftermath of the suspense! Please, please, please, please, please, let me know somehow when the next chapter will be out. Thank u!
ExilEden chapter 16 . 8/18/2007
Wow, I just read your story, and I thought that it is fantastic. But it's been a while now, and I've noticed that you haven't updated. I hope you're planning on continuing this fanfic again someday!

~AmEva
quixotomy chapter 16 . 8/3/2007
What is it like, holding your child for the first time? Is it an experience you're never going to forget?

Because so many mothers have told me the first time they saw their baby, they knew that they would die for them right there and then. And I'm intrigued as to how someone could feel an emotion so strongly. And everything they (the mothers- my own included) made me want to have a child of my own. But I don't think I'm ready. Not, at least, until I find the right person to have it with.

And you seem to convey emotions so well in this story, but I never thought that writing some words down could accurately describe something like love. You do a ver good job, but I can't help wondering...what is it like to be in love? To feel like you would die for someone? I want to feel something like that, and I'm very envious of anyone who has.

Please update this story soon. I can't tell how it's going to end, and I usually can with fanfics. I'm very glad that you didn't decide to go for Kyou/Tohru...there's a bit too much of it, I think.
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