Reviews for Eye of the Predator
goldacharmed chapter 3 . 10/23/2008
hello, why have you not updated this in years. i really want to see what happens. please even though you most lucky forgot about this, please update soon. later dude.
GuessWho chapter 3 . 9/27/2005
Please, please, PLEASE let this have a happy ending! I really like poor Otto, and I want him to be okay.

PS-will you EVER finish this?
Paco the Taco chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Very good.
morph chapter 3 . 11/23/2004
Wow. cool fic! It makes me want to read the novel. I love how the tentacles talk to Ock. I hope you update again soon!
CDAnders chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
Me again! Just wanted to please ask you to read my Spidey stories, Spider-Man 2 Story, and a new fic I just wrote last night, The Wrong Way to Write About Spidey. Please read them! ~C. D. Anders~ _
Lady Russell Holmes chapter 3 . 10/17/2004
Ooh, this is good. Otto blind, and the arms sly. Never a good combo, except for us readers. Come on, update!
Agent Silver chapter 3 . 10/17/2004
Repto-dude! Bravo! (claps) Are you going to make the kids care for Otto or something? Hey, what if he meets Madam Web or something? (Just brought Spiderman guide) Y'know, that blind old lady that spiderman meets for advice? That'll be cool, but Otto being a blind baddie doesn't really sound too safe (I have a feeling ol' Pete will have some kind of sympathty)

And understand school. They get in my way too. heh, Writer's block is just too evil!
Karina of Darkness chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
*impressed!* write more!
CDAnders chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
I can't tell you how much I LOVE this! It's an ecstacy! I've always been a HUGE Ock fan; I LOVE the way you brought his old self back. Hope you check out mine sometime. More more more!
CDAnders chapter 2 . 10/16/2004
Edge-of-your-seat excitement! I love it! It kinda reminds me of Gollum/Smeagol (no offense if your not a big LOTR fan). You know, when he talks to himself. It sounds like the tentacles are nice, or maybe they're just minipulating. hard to decipher. Please check out my story, and see if you can think up a title for it. Please tell me what you think. Anyway, I LOVE this fic! More, please!
LadyKayoss chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
Oh, this is interesting. I didn't like how the book portrayed the ending - I refuse to believe that Ock died. It's nice to see him alive and well, even if he is blind. He really is going to have to rely on the arms more than ever now, and he's going to become much easier for them to manipulate...
Stray the Metallic Imp chapter 3 . 10/16/2004
Oh...I like this! Come on Repto, I want an update! Jeez...I probably sound like a hypocrit right now. Don't worry, I'm not done with Make Me Feel, but I have another idea for a story right now...
xKielaWolfx chapter 2 . 9/11/2004
dude you are so welcome :-) love the story! o and thanks for yor review... im working on my spelling dont worry k :-D

TO ALL OTTO FANS OUT THER...

"the power of the sun in the pome of my hand" or ill peal the flesh off her bones.*shink shink shink*

the doctor is ni

ok ill syop :-D so keep it up i like it ... not shor of the blind thinh thouw... o well you fic.. like it cant what for more :-)
Moon Avenger chapter 2 . 8/24/2004
Poor Otto... But at least he's alive. He may not have Rosie but he has millions of raging fans to back him up.
Lady Russell Holmes chapter 2 . 8/23/2004
Hmm. I like it!
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