The all too needed but still shocking dose of realism to the KP universe

Guess it was a one-shot after all. Too bad.

is a hero must bleed a one chapter story?

You are to true on many accounts the creaters of kim possble made a story where villans where jokes even to themsevles, it was obvios that any fool could attack her at any moment or her famliy thats why love so much the story the price we pay taechunsa "Noble ideals are great, but those ideals are usually payed for in blood by a person who doesn't have the luxury of those ideals" his qoute and i agree that a true hero is born of misery, suffering, blood, seat and tears evry true hero has tragedy behind them that pushes them to go byond like you said spiderman. Why dont you finish what you started and from that tragedy let a hero be born from the blood sacraficing all (he/she) has to find justice and perhaps vengence i would pefer ron but it's your show

This was not bad for a one shot with dark edge to it. When you find it funny becuase the villians in the series act more like james bond character instead of what a real villians should be. Enjoyed reading this fic.

bloody goodness...made me think about "the grudge" and "kill bill" mixed together for some reason...odd*hits self* sorry, more to come? will there be another chapter?...who was the killer?...ron?more deaths of those she cares about?lol, just reading all your fics...

Poor, Possible family and Kim, I wonder who did it? Anyway's you should keep on going, update soon please!

uh just a guess is every body saying ron is the killer? im confused.

A very interesting concept for a story. I would like to see if you could make this more than a one shot. As for your question i would like to see you update either separated of the day it changed. You have a great talent and i hope you keep it up.

Indeed, it is pretty violent.. well written, but very gruesome. But hey.. RL is like this. Only, with all her family dead, KP has nothing to lose now.. except her life.. and for her to stop being a hero would not give her family any justice.

That was my two cents. 'love your style, keep it up .

-Lion

you read kims revenge. please update the day it changed! please!

Ok, this was gruesome. Poor family.

Well, since what you really wanted was feedback on your other stories, I'd prefer either Separated or The Day it Changed be updated. I like seeing how Kim has a hard time dealing w/ life w/out Ron.

Uh guys, the main point of this story is to get feedback as to which story I should update. I can't do all of them, but if any of you have a preference I'm all ears.

Wow, that was...extremely brutal.

I do hope you expand this into more than just a one-shot.

Good start.

Well. It was... okay. The emotional response from Kim seemed a bit muted. Especially considering the horrible, tragic, vile, etc, etc events that took place in her 'Safe Suburban Home.'

Is this going to be more than a one shot?

If it isn't, how about a fusion: KP as 'The Punisher'

That would make an interesting story. Wade as Micro and Ron as...well some guy (sorry I think Punisher only really has Micro).

Can't wait to see what you end up doing with it, but please do try and finish all of the open stories you have going. Well maybe not ALL of them but you know...