You're so screwing around. There's no clue in Two Cathedrals...

Amazing story. Really harsh and powerful, with so much feeling and meaning in such few words. The thing is, that you wrote this so well I could see this happening. Even though it should be OOC, it's not. The way you wrote this is fantastic. The imagery and the way the dialogue was written was dead-on. Jed's characterization through Abbey's thoughts was completely spot on and incredibly real-feeling. Abbey's thoughts are the best, especially the train of thought from the beginning of the story to the end of it. Especially the last line, the way she saw Jed and herself was so achingly sad and true. It almost felt sorry for her - almost. I felt way, way, way sorrier for poor Jed...:(

This was an interesting take on the Abbey-infidelity idea that I thought was very good. I couldn't figure out who the other man was, I guess it could be any of the staff.

I can't for the life of me figure out who it is. Season 2 on DVD, bedroom, must go now to figure it out!

I think that I have a pretty good idea of who the other guy is because of in The Two Cathedrals he calls him his son. I think that it is a very good writing and I think that you should keep writing. I want to see what Jed does.

Oh my God who the hell is this? This is going to bother me completely. I've seen 'Two Cathedrals' dozens of times, that's one of my favorite episodes but I can't for the life of me figure out who's in the bed with Abbey. You said that Bartlet thinks of this guy as a son...which leaves it to Josh, Toby, Sam, and Charlie...Dammit I have to watch 'Two Cathedrals' now...wait I have the script from this WW scriptbook *pounces on book*

I know who it is, and it only took me a day to figure it out! Nice piece of writing!