I like The Rescuers in Manhattan.

I did read this story a few years back, and it was pretty interesting, but I have one question.

Where are the rest of the chapters?

Hmm... This does have potential, I will not lie. I can't wait to see more! Keep it up, please.

They have a family? Cool!

Where's the rest of the story?

Just do it for disney, A tribute to Miss Bianca's voice is an option if you are looking for a good idea.

Bad news...i know you want to make this into a movie when you grow up. But Eva Gabor, the voice actor for Miss Bianca is...well...dead. Eva died in 1995. Lung cancer or a lung illness. sorry:(

Please continue this story. This 1st chapter sounds like it could be the start of a 3rd movie if possible. Along with Bernard & Bianca and their family are you going to include Jake and other supporting animal characters from either movie. Nonetheless please continue with this story. Do not leave your readers hanging. Thank you! :)

This is a wonderful story so far, are you going to continue it?

Oh, and whether you would redo, or go further with this story, I strongly hope you do so :)
You've got the right idea(where the story would take place and all).

Aww, that's cute, about the idea of being another sequel to the movie.
I commend your idea of wanting to do another Rescuers movie with Disney, the two Rescuers movies were one of my top favorite Disney movies :)

The Rescuers 3 The Great Adventures

"Aloha," eh? Interesting name for a girl.

This story kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time, but in a good way! I think 12 is a little old to picture but if that's what you choose, that's cool too! Can I use Aloha, Fuschia and Mischa in a story I'm doing? I understand if the answer's no, just thought I'd ask. Keep on rockin'!

I loved it.