Cool chapter continue please.

this is really awesome i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

please update this story

You have to continue this story

You do know that lemons are allowed as long as they are within the correct rating.

Please tell me you are going to update this thing because that would be so hot if you did.

plz you've got to update this fic! plz plz plz

Now let it be known that i have read most of your stories, even if i didnt review them. You are quite the author. So far none of your stories have passed below the average level. Most are phenomenal, a few even can be considered perfect, the best of the best. Please by all that holy & unholy update your stories any and all of them.

Nice concept, the writing is decent but thats it.

You're not the only one, but this is typical OOC well, bull. Basically, its a lame premise, the way that Ranma decides to suddenly change everything, plus, everybody is completely out of character.

GO READ THE MANGA or at least watch the anime more carefully.

I'll point out a few things:

Akane is not a mallet wielding maniac, read the manga, its true.

Ranma never "blew the top of the mountain" he chopped it off with a magical weapon - Ryoga can do that. Its impressive, but its common.

As for continuity problems:

Ranma's honor has been conditioned by Genma for the past 16 years, he isn't going to change.

Ranma just risked his life saving Akane, hes not going to suddenly hate her.

I don't think Nodoka takes the Seppukku pledge as seriously as some might think, while she would kill Ranma if he goes completely out of bounds, she didn't do anything when he was acting all cowardly in he lap.

As much as I hate to say it (considering Ranma is my favourite character) when Akane hits him, he either deserves it, or is impossibly unlucky.

Lastly, get a bit of originality, I might be being unfair, but "Avatar or Chaos" "Being smashed into Lower Earth Orbit" and "Shampoo's bicycle of death" were originally creative, but have been used by way too many people.

To put it simply, you're just the unlucky person who wrote something thats the same as the masses of other authors of bad fanfiction and I'm ranting at you, despite the fact that I feel the same way for many other pieces of writing. Hopefully though, you might now pick up and read the manga from a new outlook.

On the other hand, your english is quite good, although I suggest not using colons since this isn't script format. A bit of proof reading might not be too bad either.

Good luck on your next fanfic! I'll be honest, I really liked the idea of this crossover, might be my sick little mind :P

Cool, write more.

Cool, write more.

i like this story so far i think you should write others stories too anyway i hope to read the next chapter.

i like it and please update.

This was pretty terrible. The only thing i remotely liked about it was the general idea of the Ranma/Dead or Alive Extreme Beach Volleyball concept.

For the love of god slow down and use more grammar. The pacing is so horrible, and everyone is so Out of Character.

Cool chapter.