Uhm, wth Zim ahould just stab keef and gretchen to death with his pak legs!

This has been quite good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story! Are you going to update?

~demonraimundo11

ZOMG keef and gretchen are so retarded xD!

I CANT WAIT FOR TEH ZADR XD !

I haven't even gotten a third of the way through the first chapter yet, but I can tell that this is going to be one GOOD fanfic. It's very IC, very true to the original show. I am IMPRESSED. I'll review again when I finish. *adds to favorites*

I'm surprised Zim hasn't killed Keef yet. I would have.

HURRY UP, I want them to get together!

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Aww! This is awesome. I wonder what Gretch and Keef are up to? Sounds sinister.. Or maybe it's not? I dunno!

I liked it so far...they're lucky lol. People actaully dance at their dances. They just stand around and talk at mine T_T

LOL Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

This is fantastic the most ic ZADR fic i have read in the longest time congrats I think its great and you did a great job making this chapter really long hooray I like the whole Keef and gretchen thing it is neat they are not stupid after all well not completely love the parts of Zim and dib too they arent all that frequent but they are very zim and dibish g2g keep writing

Yay for updates! - And don't worry about not having ZADR in this chapter yet! The story is moving along smoothly, no need to rush! Geez, Keef can be pretty evil when he puts his mind to it...bleah! Can't wait to read the next chappy!

YES! A longer chapter! Hurray! :-D

I was so excited about that when I looked at how small the little scroll-thing at the side was ;; I love reading your chapters... they always keep me glued to the page... so a longer one was uber-awesome XD

And LOOK! I'm actually reviewing right -after- I read! It's amazing! I NEVER do that anymore oO;

But anyway...

This chapter's so totally my favorite so far! They just keep getting better and better and more suspenseful...

And funny. This chapter made me laugh so much xD (They all tend to though xD)

Like... Keef and Gretchen tying down Dib was so great XD That's just... something you really wouldn't have expected from them. You'd think it would've been Zim or something... but nope ;; Though it was obvious it was that devious little Keef's idea... his logic is so insane. It's hilarious xD

You know, it's almost like Keef's minipulating Gretchen in a way... I wonder if she notices. And if she does, if she's just kinda letting him do it because she wants Dib to like her so bad. It's a kinda interesting thought...

I love it when Zim's all mean n' evil ;; I know he's not like that much... but I think it's awesome whenever he is anyway... :-D

SKEDADDLE! XD What a great word! I burst out laughing when I read that line XD Keef -always- says the weirdest things... but it never fails to amuse me at how creepily happy he always is... "Besides, he could keep Nick company. They ought to get along great with their eternal happiness." xD I agree XD That's so true...

Oh and you know... random as it is... I really liked Ms. Bitters' lines too oO;; They made me laugh... I like how she lectured to them about how horrible and life-ruining dances are XD

But gah! .O Omg... they way Zim and Dib are being torn apart is just so sad to me... ;_;

I mean... it's obvious they'd rather go with -eachother- to that dance than with Gretchen or Keef, but either they won't admit it or they just haven't realized it completely yet...

I mean... Zim called to Dib for HELP... that's gotta say something.

That particular line, by the way... filled me with such joy because Zim was calling for Dib and yet such sadness at the same time because Dib didn't hear... Good job I love it when things inspire those kinds of mixed emotions in me...

Zim and Keef's conversations are always so entertaining. It's like... the same things always being said, but it never fails to make me laugh xD Keef just can't seem to take a hint... he's such a creepy stalker oO It's too funny xD

I like how you wrote out Zim and Dib's little fight at the end. It was really good. And now it's apparent that Zim's hiding a little something... which, I'm guessing, is the fact that he'd rather be spending time with Dib instead of Keef?

That's so cute. You know their only fighting because they haven't realized they NEED eachother yet ;;

It makes me so sad that Keef and Gretchen's plans are working though... There better be some ZADR in the next chapter! .O I wanna see them together! ;;

But until you update... I guess I'll just have to be unsatisfied... So write more soon! Because you're amazing! xD

Yay!

it's looking good so far can't wait for the next chapter

This whole situation sounds like a horrible nightmare. Uhg.

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