update soon

This story... well... it has potential. The whole premise is an excellent idea. But you're going to need to fix the quality of writing. Honestly this is almost unreadable and only at about a 6th grade leve (maximum). There is no real plot to speak of and you're just basically throwing in ideas as they come without adding them into the plot. Just sudden randomness that does not in anyway add to this story. I say go back and rewrite this entire story, while at the same time having it beta'ed by an outside source.

I really enjoy your story! The humour of it really make my day! I especially like the maruaders reuntied till lemony days it was crazy! I hope you'll continue because I can't wait what happened to JJ and the rest.

this story's fun... read mine? Harry Potter and the Requiem of the Lost Ones

i like it but ithink your going to fast , you could have more detail. please updatesoon

I like the story and hope that you will get Harry together with someone soon and i hope its Pansy

its really good what happen with ron and com. to harry?

i love this story. UPDATE SOON

like it

please update soon, i really like this story ive been waiting forever for a new chapter, pleae update.

good story please update soon

oh i love it

good but not good enough!

hahahaha

if i were malfoy and co. i wouldn't go backstage...

i wouldn't have the nerve...

i really want to see what happens...

will Neglected brag to malfoy and co. and get them really upset?

write soon

the story is great