His hair is aburn which is a mix of brown and red but i have to admit it looks more red.. i like this story so far by the way.

I like the story idea, and your spelling is better than most of the stuff on here. Grammar's a bit off, but not bad.

You talked about not knowing if Daisuke's hair was red or brown, then said in chapter 2 that you've come to the conclusion that it's reddish-brown, which it is. You also said that was too much to write out, but...you don't have to write it out. There's an actual word for reddish-brown. It's called auburn. Try using that in your future stories.

*sniffs* that was beautiful ! Bravo

I'm afraid I'll have to keep my reviews short because I don't have my to say that I haven't said before ;D

SRS

This was really good!

why is it that in every fanfic that I read, that people always write Daisuke as a comeletely clueless baka or have him go all emo? seriously, its getting really old. why can't people portray him as a regular person like they do with other characters? its not so hard. I mean, if Takari fans can learn not to bash Daisuke in their fanfics, then people can learn how to portray Daisuke as a positive character.

*sniff* Aw D:. Like really. Aw. T-T. Daisuke's always the one that gets hurt isn't it D:. It's like no one really listen or notice otherwise T-T. *pats his hair* Everything's okay now D:. On a lighter note, that was a very lovely story. Good Job.

xD

Yes, Takeru, denial is an ugly thing.

Great story though.

WOW!

i liked this story a lot!

*adds to favorite stories*

can't wait to read more from you!

Great story. Sad, but great.

OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD! That was so AWESOME! I swear, i was in tears at the end! *sniffle* It was so... DEEP. Has anyone told you that? I'll bet they have! (sniffle) SO BEAUTIFUL!

1: Er, it thing his hair is more of a mahogany colour... you know, reddish-brown. In one episode, it was maroon, and in another, it was the same colour as Taichi. Very odd.

Great story, though! I be off to read the next chapter! (sreamers fly and wine fizzes from a bottle) HUZZAH!

I love it! grande! its was sad but a good make up at the end! I really like your stories! glade i read 2 now im gonig to read more :P

Good job... I'm crying right now, JUST DON'T DO THIS AGAIN!

!1

i remember reading this story a really logn time ago when my computer was being an asshead so i couldnt' review, but i wanted to o

Oi! Onee-sama! Nice story! See, I read them. This is cool. Ican't wait to see what else goes on. Gotta go read the next two chapters now.