| Reviews for Blackgate |
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   Snake-Head chapter 8 . 7/17/2005 Like he had that hanging flap of skin at the roof of his mouth after burning himself, and wanted to pick at it. Uh, nice, uh, simile… Still love the story though. |
| Snake-Head chapter 5 . 7/17/2005 The team and General Hammond arrived at the Control Room, looking down thru the thick armored glass shield into the Gate Room. Try not to abbreviate words like through too often, it takes the certain feeling out of the story. |
| Snake-Head chapter 4 . 7/17/2005 Ooh. I try not to review every chapter but with this I’m finding it hard not to! Is this story in any C2 archives? Coz it should be! It is truly one of a kind. |
| Snake-Head chapter 3 . 7/17/2005 O’Neill has 2 l’s. Its official. |
| Snake-Head chapter 2 . 7/17/2005 Review: Wow. Now I remember why I liked this story so much. This is some of the best dialogue, and character use (and description-the way you described Teal’c) I’ve seen to create the “back story” or even just a beginning. Excellent. Do you have any secrets as to how you do this? |
| Snake-Head chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 Hey. Well since it had been a while before you suddenly started updating again, I'm re-reading this from the start so I have a good grip of whats going on. I remember I really liked the story, but I know I didn't even finish it to where you had done before (unknown reasons, probably school work). Anyway, you'll hear from me again soon! :P |
| SG-Fan chapter 16 . 7/11/2005 I LOVE Thor! |
| LiMiYa chapter 17 . 7/10/2005 Great, but short chapter. Update soon! |
| Banner chapter 16 . 6/21/2005 Scary and fascinating... This story is terrific. |
| CMDR.Roberts chapter 16 . 6/21/2005 Not too bad so far I am on edge to find out what happens next |
| Bluesman chapter 14 . 1/5/2005 I have been following this story since it's inception and have found it to be very gripping. However, the amount of time between chapters is extremely frustrating! GET ON THE STICK, TREY! |
| Snake-Head chapter 9 . 9/6/2004 that last chapter didnt work properly. you might wanna check it out. anyway its a good story, my kinda subtle eeriness, something i can rarely write, and you've done good. 1st one i've read that has lived up to 1st expectations. good work. do me a favour? read my psychotic story and let me know what you think. it would be nice coming from a good creepy writer such as yourself. |
| SJDM12 chapter 10 . 9/5/2004 Good story, bring on more |
| kkenny chapter 6 . 8/25/2004 You have an interesting story but I have this inexplicable feeling of deja vu deja vu... err what I mean is that it appears that you have accidently uploaded the same chapter twice. |
| snipercore chapter 1 . 8/23/2004 starts of too prechie |
