Reviews for A Woman Scorned
Guest chapter 9 . 5/28
Bbrae 4ever how could u do this to me why did you choose bbterra i HATE HATE terra she is a traitor and I know that she sacrificed herself in the end but she still betrayed them and I still hate her Raven is way better than her and I think that if bb truly loved raven he would have stayed with her even though she can’t feel emotions cuz he loves her what I’m trying to say is that’s only dated terra cuz she liked him and could feel but he did not love her he was confused and if raven could feel he would still be with her and if terra could not feel he would have never gone with her so this means he did not love terra or raven I think the better ending would have been that he stayed alone he betrayed the one he loved and dated one he did not for that he never truly loved them so he should have been rejected by both that is what he gets for messing with peoples feelings. Btw I still hate terra raven is better so you should not do any more bbterra fanfic ok got that.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/29/2018
Hmmm... Interesting. Raven just isn't as dark as I'd hoped. Raven's funny when she's mean!
Raven Logan chapter 10 . 3/8/2016
Noooooooooooooo not Terra not Bbterra I cry right now
Guest chapter 10 . 12/11/2015
Sorry but I don't like this story it's BbRae forever
Lostlove chapter 10 . 5/19/2015
It's a beautiful story but it's just so sad for Raven she deserves so much after her terrible childhood and I know it's not your fault that you try to keep it realistic but still I kind a wish she had a happy ending at least because her beginning was not happy in the list for life was just miserable
Emily chapter 10 . 11/4/2014
Don't worry too much. I really like your ending. It was sculptured in a beautiful, realistic way and the ending was so moving that it split my heart. It was really good. I hope I can see it in your other fanfics.
BBT 4ever chapter 10 . 8/16/2014
As you can tell by the name, I love the ending. My only thing is I wish you would've paired Cy&Rae. Amazing story though! BB&T 4ever!
raeofshimmeringsunshine chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
I swear, I'm gonna punch Terra.
Checkaflu chapter 10 . 1/8/2012
Beautiful story.
Checkaflu chapter 10 . 1/8/2012
its a sad ending. make me cry. but u good writer and me like-a this story alot.
Willow Pierce chapter 10 . 4/30/2011
WIN ;)
WobblyJelly chapter 10 . 4/17/2011
Love is dangerous. Usually why I stay away from it, like Raven.

Poor her. I really don't like Terra, but I like the way you pictured her in this story. Great story.
Specialshipping19 chapter 10 . 11/22/2010
*Sniffle* MAN, WAS THAT THE MOST DRAMA FILLED AND ROMANTIC-ISH FIC I HAVE EVER READ! I wish Raven was with BB, I started crying when It got to the part where Raven finds out BB cheated (in the 1st chappie). You probably quit FF by now, but I need to post this! It was soooooooo sad, I had an asthma attack after crying so much.I'm gonna add it to faves cause it was so filled with drama, but...RAVEN AND BB! TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
RandomWriterPerson chapter 10 . 2/21/2009
Heyy, umm DemiGod,

I'd like to ask of a really big favour of you. I really don't know if you'll allow it, so i decided to take the risk to ask anyway.

After I'd finished reading your story, I had been toying with an Idea in my head. A VERY angsty Tragic idea that popped into my head when I finished reading the epilogue.

As much as i don't like it, I can't deny it, the idea had been swimming around in my head and I've finally decided to put it into writing tonight.

The story is set on the epilogue of this story, That's right, I'm asking if I could borrow the plot of your story for the context of Bestboy's betrayal to Raven and Whom, and the wedding/honeymoon part.

The story would go on about her emotional state, however in my story, raven still does not have complete control over her emotions, she doesn't need to control them as much because she barely feels any emotions anymore. Beastboy had broken her completely and entirely. But she still has the fear that one day if she breaks down completely, she will unintentionally bring about the end of all things, due to the magnitude of her power if they were released in waves of anguish.

If you'd like, I can send you the story when I'm done with it to find out your views towards it. And for you to read through to have an idea on what I had planned to write.

I am asking for your permission to publish my story in , a story that uses YOUR story for the context for my plot's backstory. Of course, credit will be given to the Artist/Author of original idea.

Of course, should you choose not to allow publication of said story, I will gladly keep it in my own Hard Disk for self critique. I have no issues with doing that As I have done with most of the plots I have in mind, but had not yet thought through.

Either way, I have no qualms about it.

I await your reply regarding this matter.

Yes, I do realize that I should send this as a Personal Message perhaps, but past experiences where PM's have gone missing prove to me just hope much i trust the PM system on Flyff. I'd rather sedn it as a review, due to the fact that it is also a review about you work and how much I was enthralled by it.

However, I have a problem with empathy, so while i was reading the story I could feel the Sadness the story was made to portray in a not so friendly manner, it suffocated me to the point where i was nearly gasping for breath. I could feel the heart wrenching sadness the story was made to portray. But it's also a Curse to me because, it's not something I can turn on or off, it's an occurrence on a subconscious level that is beyond my control. I'm trying my best to keep my emotions at bay while I complete the story. As i have with my two others.

I look forward to your further guidance as I am still pretty new as an Author, Having only published two stories, One shots, myself.

Thank you,

~A. A
Treeonice chapter 10 . 6/24/2007
I want to cry now. That was a good fic and I haven't read one like that in a long time.
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