As someone who doesn't ship or like drarry, you are an AMAZING writer! As someone loves to write as well, you truly convey emotion phenomenally; especially in this specific chapter. This work is so very sad. I usually don't like reading fanfic like this, but this was truly great. I tend to like most of what is canon in Harry Potter, and I will still never ship drarry, but thank you for making this amazing piece.

Not the worst place to end the story I suppose - heavy stuff!

Update please.

So sad.

Please continue!

If I like a fanfic, I generally go to the author's profile and look at their other stories. As you may have realized if you looked at Catechism's reviews. So I found this. And love it. It has definitely gone longer without an update, that can't be denied, but that doesn't mean you won't update soon. Right? Right. Draco is... interesting in this story and I really was to see how these characters develop. Hope you find your muse (or whatever it is you need to continue writing) soon!

I love this. Please continue!

Awwwh this is such an awesome story! Please don't abandon it QQ

I almost teared up here, I'm not gonna lie. Please, write more of this. When you start a project this brilliant, how can you not finish it?

I am asking you this, as a reader who hasn't read something so brilliantly tragic in an eternity, to please take up writing this story again, please?

Oh, wow...really good, this one! Brilliant! Good job on not revealing everything to soon, etting them follow a natural course rather than forcing everything to gush out. Fav~!

Hey,

this is good, really good. Not as great as Catechism, but I've read ffs for 8 (?) years or so now and I have only read a handful of ffs as good (if completely different). You are an amazing writer and I really hope that, although this hasn't been updated in years, you will eventually return to it as you did to Catechism.

I enjoy your Draco here a lot. He doesn't overthrow himself in order to help Harry as I've read in other ffs where Harry was abused by his relatives, he is the mean, manipulative Slytherin that we know (and kind of love). But of course, he cannot really stay true to this, because even Draco Malfoy can't watch Harry completely destructing himself. I loved that the reason he made harry eat more was more for him having a worthy opponent for his quidditch games than for Harry's sake.

And Snape and him thinking that Harry was cheating in the test (which, of course, seemed like the more likely alternative from the outside), because he actually knew what to do... I also liked the small interactions of Snape and Draco, letting Draco get away with disgracing Ron and Hermione, but not appreciating it and making sure that Draco knows that and the whole scene with Draco asking about the Coverall... I loved that one!

But I have to admit that your Snape seems to be a bit out of it. There are just some things, like Harry jerking back when he comes to close during their confrontation during the potions test, that he simply shouldn't overlook as a spy and generally observant person. But of course, that is your decision to make.

Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it,

ai

Compelling and addictive story, have read it multiple times. If you ever feeling like adding any more, I'd snap it up like anything :D

Another great story! Please, please update again!

This story is amazing. Truly amazing. I found it when was down, and I've kept it open for 2 days, just to let you know :) I really hope you'll update it someday, as it's truly fantastic...