| Reviews for Future Paths |
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Guest chapter 4 . 4/13/2015 Wtf?! How dare u have gaara die in both visions. Why cant u kill off sasuke. Hes an asshole traitor. Or sakura whos a weakling. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2015 Oh yuck. Sasukes were stupid too. They should NOT include sakura the slut. Fuck you! |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/12/2015 What a bunch of crap! Sakura's futures are all SHIT! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2015 Sakura's such a bitch back in the first season of Naruto. She's so nasty and ugly to Naruto. Total cow! If she's gonna be center stage then I think I'll leave this story. I hate the little cow! |
anemix chapter 5 . 9/20/2009 Very interesting and haunting. I liked Naruto's the best, if only for his reactions and Kyuubi. Though interesting, the visions started to drag on and get boring towards the end, though it might be from me reading this all in one sitting. I was a bit disappointed at their reactions to their newly gained knowledge though. Naruto finding out about his father? His teammates finding out about Kyuubi? Though I guess those are overused, I would've liked to see your take on them. By the way, what parts of the visions did they see and from what perspective. It's well written for the reader, but confusing on what the characters actually viewed. How did Naruto see the vision written from Gaara's POV anyway? (\/) ( . .) c(")(") BUNNY |
G chapter 1 . 12/22/2008 "Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masahsi-sensei, not me, which should be obvious. If it did the art would be a lot worse as I can’t draw to same my life and Hinata and Tenten would get moer appearances. No porfit is being made from this and if you feel like suing my, tough, I’m broke and that doesn’t look to change any time soon." First I'd just like to mention that a disclaimer that looks like that doesn't make the story itself look very promising. That aside, even though the chapter looks better it failed to really keep my interest. Can't remember much of what happened. Though the food infront of me may have had something to do with that. Still, I noticed a Bleach one-shot in your profile that looked interesting enough. I'll go check that out instead. |
Itallia chapter 5 . 11/19/2006 Now you've got me sitting here wondering what will "really" happen! |
Itallia chapter 4 . 11/19/2006 An interesting array of possibilities. So why were his stars brighter but fewer? He has fewer possible paths, obviously...so is the brighter a direct consequence to that, as if saying they're more likely because there are fewer? |
Itallia chapter 3 . 11/19/2006 That would certainly leave Sasuke thinking and wondering, though I'm a little surprised that you didn't show a future where Orochimaru got his body and he had to experience the things he would be forced to do. |
Itallia chapter 2 . 11/19/2006 Interesting. I'm curious as to what that green seal on Sakura in the last vision was... |
Itallia chapter 1 . 11/19/2006 Hm...it's interesting to see someone out-verbal-spar Kakashi like that. There needs to be a character like that in canon. |
LeadYouIn chapter 5 . 6/23/2006 This is such a fabulous story! It highlights both the prospect of friendship and that of love in a way that seems entirely believable! I love it! |
Suzerain chapter 5 . 4/7/2006 Cool story. Heh, loved all the various futures, especially the one with Naruto and Gaara battling it out. That was sweet. Heh, toodles. |
ShortySC22 chapter 5 . 12/22/2005 Good job! I enjoyed this little story. |
whiterose03 chapter 5 . 1/15/2005 Great story, i really enjoyed it. The future parts were interesting as well, especially the last one of Naruto's. |