Reviews for Queen of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione is going to die when this is all done ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Offer her body and soul WTF ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The one she is talking to may be the death eater twin ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her name is is NOT Harmony ! It's HERMIONE |
![]() ![]() ![]() What will the earth in his body do to him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. I am wondering if you are planning on finishing it. Please do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how is it possible that see is the heir |
![]() ![]() ![]() EXCELLENT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an enjoyable chapter. Keep smiling. :-) |
![]() ![]() I just wanted to point out that Hermione is with an E at the end not an y. But other than that it is a great story and kept me interested. The one spelling did distract me some times. |
![]() ![]() Realy, realy, realy good! Just needs a few commas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fair start. In the next few chapters you need explain why Hermione would consider going and why Snape would let her. I would like to see where you take this. If you are going to use short chapters, post often. :) |