Your sentences (at least what I managed to get through) are really run-on and wordy. A lot of people seem to like your story a lot, though, so hopefullyon a different dayI can take the time to read it.
Writing is hard: keep striving and thanks for your hard work.

great story :)

I really enjoyed this;

This story is so romantic and sweet I love it

awww!

cutest couple ever they are.

tehy are aeswmoe! I maen aamnzig! Good wirtnig too!

Bravo. Very good story i like it keep up the good work! :)

Very nice work! :) A lot to say realy I like your view of how they get togetter not just the tipicle he is a bastard, mean badass he actually had feelings sort of.

I LOVED the ending! It just got better and better the more I read.
This for me was by far the best Bulma and Vegeta story iv'e read.
AMAZING! really well done.

gr8 story i loved it

love the story. it was very cute and loving.

great story loved the ending

That was really cool story! I enjoyed it a lot there were some mistakes like saying him instead of her, or mix of then and than. I'd love it more if it had lemony goodness, but beside that it was sweet and heart warming in the end :)

Nice story I liked it.

ohhhh no she didn't! Did she just say that to him, I was laughing my head off!