Reviews for Partially Damaged, Nonrefundable
ShiningSugar14 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
I know this is old... Like, really old... But I don't care. I love it and I'm going to read it all the instant my finals are over. It's amazing. I've toyed with the idea of a Galerians continuation, but I don't think I could do any better than this.
ForsakenOathKeeper chapter 4 . 3/29/2008
I love that "What did you do to my baby! You little bastard!"
Wolfess-Sanu chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
The best CainxRion fic so far on the web!
LVCP chapter 7 . 3/14/2006
This is a prety good story! I like it!
LVCP chapter 2 . 3/13/2006
This is really good! I'll read the rest later.
SyberiaWinx chapter 7 . 12/6/2005
Aw, it's over already? I was just beginning to really get into this! Is there a sequel or something? I really want to know what happens to Ash...I think a realtionship should develop between all three of them! I really hope you decide to write a sequel if there isn't one!
Courtney chapter 7 . 11/29/2005
oh my god! that was such a great read! keep up the good work!
lapidary chapter 7 . 5/8/2005
Holy-crap. ) I don't think I've ever read such a fic that extracted so much of my emotion. My shounenai fangirl giggles, "WTF"s for Chapter 6, and just a big grin plastered over my face at Ash's polite way of molesting Rion. If I had one objection, it would be that the story kind of whooshed; happy to shock in a split instant, but it adds to the plot, ne?
Elendraug chapter 7 . 5/3/2005
And I was expecting this to have a sad ending. I'm glad it didn't. XD; Well, -I- think you did it justice and then some. Excellent work.

Sorry for spamming your review page to hell. XD

But. Like. What happened to Ash? o.o
Elendraug chapter 6 . 5/3/2005
- It's so amusing that Cain is still preoccupied with the ass-grabbing. XDD

- No buttsex for Rion.

- ...'holy shit' doesn't cover this one. Did they abandon poor Sleeves? x.x Oh wait, Sleeves is okay. Good.

- Holy shit again. I am spamming your review page. How appropriate that Birdman died while in the air. e.e
Elendraug chapter 5 . 5/3/2005
- Haha, I'm just as perverted as Ash. AshxCainxRion yes please.

- You made me cry for Lilia. You win.

- Holy shit. Just... Ow.
Elendraug chapter 4 . 5/3/2005
-Ooh, Ash is jealous.

-Boyfriend. That's adorable. It's so rare that such a pleasant term makes its way into fanfics about these characters, y'know?

-XD That poor cat. I can't imagine Cain being fat, either. Tasting like chocolate. M.

-Damn,- you write the best sex scenes. The writing is just so...everything flows so well. Not one sentence is awkward. You rule.
Elendraug chapter 3 . 5/3/2005
- Rita-Cain Kodak moment. So sweet.

- XD Shame there aren't security cameras to get the laundry-day-running on film.

- ...my god. So hot. Unf. Kitchen floor is just as good as shiny-red-HandsofGod-floor. X3
Elendraug chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
- Rainheart and a kitten. Aww. I want to draw that now.

- Damn, I didn't think of that before. Flawed green eyes. Poor Cain.

- Earring, ye. *heart*

- XD Those poor pidgeons. Cain deserves it. ;(

- Rion and Ash were interrupted. Sucks. XDD Man, a dream-threesome would save them all so much effort.

*skips over to the next chapter*
Elendraug chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Well, there went the first chapter. I probably should've kept track of my comments as I read, but here's what I remember wanting to say:

- Ahaha, -something- happened between Cain and Birdman. I wonder what. 83

- It's really, really cool how you have them all living in the same apartment. It makes sense in a bizarre but strangely realistic way.

- I'm so relieved that Ash isn't gone. ;; But...wow. Mindeffing. Poor Rion.

- ¿Donde esta Pat? :O

And that's all for now. *hurries to chapter two*
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