I'm sorry but...I'm lost...

It's interesting to look at this in such a different light, if the story hadn't followed the same path again and again. Work on your punctuation, and check on 'juggle' where it's supposed to be 'jungle.'

All in all, it was decently good. Left some to be desired by way of details, but maybe that's the way you needed it to be.

I love your story! it sounds amazing so far :)

i'm so excited, can't wait for the next update

I like the plot, its definately different. Hope you continue on it i'd really like to see what happens. THanks

The One and Only

Frek

Please, please you have to update it.

I'm begging you.

Hi! Ziha,

That was good. Please add some more. Please

beth

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Great Story! Please update it. Please. I'm begging you. ;)

Your story is very interesting. Keep posting please.