this story is almost 9 years but i still hope the author will finish it because the story was awesome _

I like your story. The typos, grammar and third person thing is really starting to kill it though -_-

You go in and out of 1st and 3rd person narrative quite a bit. It makes it a little confusing. I find myself pausing and then making the corrections in my head. Also, your spell checker needs to check spelling as well as grammar as there are a lot of errors with both. Lastly, despite all that...I really like your story. Very interesting. I'm really curious to see how it will all end. :)

I'm not sure if you knew, but you have a lot of typos and grammatical errors. The story is good, but it would run a lot smoother if you enlisted someone to proof read, got a spell checker etc. But overall I like the story! :)

Hopefully you will end this story.
:)
Even though I am kinda sad that Athrun died...

Hi! First of all, thank you for writing this story. It's been 5 years since you updated but I still love this story. Up to now, I am still wondering how this would end, if Athrun is really dead. I'm sure you have moved on with your life, but I still hold on to that little flicker of hope that you can find time to finish this story. It is really beautiful and captivating.

More power to you and I hope you are doing well!

Ja
miriae

How can Tarak(kira's son) is natural since both his parents're coordinator?

Okay.. if Cagalli resigned from head representative, then whose the head of Orb representative? Athrun?

it isn't complete? omg are you gonna finish up this story? really wanna know the ending

nooooooo athrun died? WHYYYYYY :(:( please update soon! i know you avent updated in a long while but PLEASE AT LEAST FINISH THE STORY! its an awesome story and it would be awesome to read the whole thing! :)

i love your story so much

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this story is awesome

i really really like it.

Hey, I love the story that you've plotted out so far. But I've got a few questions to ask. Maybe enlighten me a little without spoiling me too much? So the first question I'd like to ask is...Is Athrun dead? 'Cause Milly said "at the cost of another." Or probably in comatose? Number two would be, did Meyrin get caught? If she did, Luna would have woken up from coma right? Hope you can clear my doubts.

Cheers,

xMari-kun

I have explored each page in this section, from one to 239. So far, I have only encountered 4 stories like this includes yours. I presume stories like this won't reach ten. A story that's so real that I don't bother anymore to analyse anything. I just get along with the complicated winding plot. This kind is better in showing reality. You do it very very well, great. Oh, well, thank you for making it so good and posting it here.

I don't really mind grammar, spelling, typos, etc. For now just mind how the story goes. Hope you will finish this story someday, and with a happy ending. Angst do us good, but happy ones encourage us more