Really Good, If I might, can I help you? I like it so far, and if you give me pointers as to where you want to go with it, I think I can help, anyway... yeah really good :)

aw! this is so cute! i wish i was (princess) kagome! keep writing!

This is cool. I like how she used the Sit Boy command on him. I even saw part of the movie where she used it so much that he was in a hole in the ground. It's called Affections Touching Across Time.

I like your story pretty much though you take too much to update but I think I can wait. It sounds pretty adorable that Inuyasha is Kagome's boduguard. I wrote a fic called Stone Flowers. It's a little similar to yours and this is the summary: Kagome is a princess and is engaged to Kouga. Sango is her only friend and knows Kagome doesn’t wish to marry Kouga who is pretty cruel and later rapes her. Houjo is Kagome's father and doesn’t accept this friendship and with Kouga's help they try to kill Sango. One day Kagome goes to look for her friend and meets a samurai named Inuyasha and falls in love with him. Their love is put in quiestion by the king and sends Inuyasha to search some treasures in order to find the Courage, Wisdom, Love, and Loyalty (Aramitama, Mijigitama, Kushinitama, and Sakinitama). But what will happen when a clan of youkai bandits kidnaps Kagome while Inuyasha is gone? In this story Inuyasha is human. Not for Kouga lovers! Warning: I use characters from later in the series (episodes 137, 138,139).

Genre: Romance/General Pairings: Inu/Kag

Rated R for foul language, violence, and sexual implications.

Okay, I deleted this fic from the site ‘cause I thought this one was the cause from not being allowed to post chapters in a long time but it turned out that this was not the cause so I’m intending to post it again. *Sigh* But I will tell you if I'm able to post it again. Hope you read it and my other stories Sibling Rivalry, Haunted, and Golden Youkai 007. No flames! Ja ne!

Mase-chan

so good. Keep going. '"Will Inuyasha find out if Kagome is the one for him? What happens next?" asked Shippo.' just an idea

Good chapter, nice little fluff moment.

I somehow get the idea that Sess' lands will be the prospective alliance...but Inu's presence may ruin it...

Hi! So this chapter was so cute.I mean that not so much in the literal sense as in the...I have no idea what the heck I am talking about. NEWays I really enjoyed the gap between times of little inu to the 15 year old inu. It was a very smooth transition. And I have to admit I have never read hemmingways stories but I do know you are definetly good at writing. Just try not to over rewrite a sentence or a paragraph or you might just lose what you were aming for. I am very interested to see how a merger with the two kingdoms might take place. Fluffy would deffinetly not marry a human so what other alternative is there? They don't know about inu's true status and there is nothing that the shikon kingdom can offer besides the daughter or the jewel itself and i don't see either being offered. I am most interested and perplexed as to how you will pull this off, so please do not take too long in updating.! Great work!

Wonderful! I don't want to rush you, but I'm excited about the ball...

UPDATE! that's all i have to say!

hey i love it! email me if u need help

Great new chapter, read what you said at the beggining about lots of stories just being crap and i have to agree with you, I've found that getting a beta reader helps a LOT, i have one for my stories and its amazing what they catch you might want to look into it, oh look at me blabbing on, i just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to edit your story!

very very good

Great story absolutely love the plot hope you update soon!

Woah! Brilliantly written and a nice opening concept.

Sesshomaru always was a pain in the ass.

Keep up the good work.

Oh my god. That was so sad. I loved it. Please continue. I want to know what comes next.