Nice story. It's so funny and amusing. I loved TsujiaixAyu pairing!

I would like to see a sequel

Oh, that was hilarious! :) I must say, it's quite believable that Tsujiai would be such an ass to Ayu, so I think he was very much in character in your story. Just like Ayu. :) She does tend to babble in her head a lot, and she's kind of goofy in her own way... I have to say, this pairing crossed my mind when I read the manga (not in the anime though). In the manga, Tsujiai did not seem TRULY interested in Nina. I thought the manga Nina suited the manga Kaji more. Oh well. That's just my opinion. *shrugs*

Hahaha, the teenage years can be such a pain. ;) Drama, drama, drama... :P

This is one of my favorite stories. I mean, god. Your storyplot is just perfect. Your way of writing is humorous and mostly, reading this, I don't portray you as an angsty writer.

(But then I read your other fanfics. Yeah...I can totally portray you as an angsty writer.)

But oh! This story is just perfect :) hope the sequel is up soon, I need to check. XD Yeah, yeah, lazy me. And the detail on Tsujiai and Teteishi's kiss? Beautifully detailed but not totally into lemon!

Fluff? Pah. This is hardcore, lifelike, straightened-out romance. Get used to it, world! *makes fist at haters tethered to leashes*

Oh well. I love your stories! And (ehehehehe) the Tsujiai\Teteishi shipping! It's too bad most people are frickin' Ayu\Tetsushi...oh well! Your story awed me! XD

Best regards,

-babypowder333

Nice.

When I read the Ultra Maniac manga, I instantly became a TsujiaixAyu shipper. I like your story.

Capitalization\grammar\spelling\punctuation is pretty good. I salute you. And that's definitely not a thing I give out a lot.

Yes. So, nice job. *salutes respectfully*

I like the way you sum their characters up, Hiroki can be OoC, but then again he always is. Heh. Ayu is the same as ever. Contrary little Ayu, when will you learn...?

A next comment. I always love TsujiaixAyu stories, but this one hit the spot. I like this. Alright then. Thank you for blessing this story upon us.

But yes, I have a question. WHEN are you updating? When are you posting the sequel? My friend is pestering me for the next one, and this is really getting me frustrated.

And one more thing:

Here's a suggestion for the next chapter of the sequel of your story. Just a little something. You don't have to use it, it's a matter of opinion.

"If you like me, just admit it, Ayu-san."

I folded my arms and glared at him. He had to be the stupidest person alive. No way I would admit I liked him...even if I did. It would be a stupid thing to do.

"Okay, I like you." Agh. There goes my mouth again.

He smirked at me and squeezed the back of my neck. "Continue, please. I'd be interested in this conversation."

I ripped his hand off my neck and pursed my lips.

"Come on, Ayu-san."

I remained stonily silent.

"Very well, if you insist. I will kiss you." And then he kissed me without asking my opinion.

(insert own story here) if you like it, that is. Please update, soon if possible. Thank you. Ciao.

I agree with your pairing; I like Hiroki and Ayu together. Good job, "czee". You do not have horrible grammar, or spelling, like some, and you space nicely, but your capitalization is a little off. But you're going well on this. Good job.

Im actually a big Ayu-Kaji fan but this story is GREAT! i really loved it and i'm looking forward to the sequel.

Well done! Well done! :)

to be quite honest, i'm not actually a tsujiai/ayu shipper, but after reading this one, i've become one lol. :) very nice story.

it was an amazing story...i'm telling u it was amazing...i never expected that tsujai and ayu would actually make a cute couple _

i can't wait for the sequel...

and the ending statement well it made me more and more curious!

AMAZING STORY!

waah...crazy chapter...still it was interesting though _

funny _ still the last part seriously made me frozen on my seat _

EHEHE...well tsujai is becoming a bit ooc still it gives the story more life..._

seriously i could make a change to tsujaiXayu after reading this...all i can say it's...WOW!

hehe...your randomness has overwhelming results...actually i also thought he was serious and i didn't even know if i was going to laugh, to freeze or something it was too overwhelming a chapter...

aww...u know even though i'm a fan of kajiXayu this is really still cute _...they make a cute couple _...that last scene was really sweet _

hehe...aw...a litte fight...that was cute _ really funny too...haha...and really ur sidenotes made it more catchy and funny _