| Reviews for Trust |
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tenacioustictac chapter 1 . 9/10/2005 lol! that was sad! its was good though! i cant believe raven didnt suspect anything! lol! GREAT JOB |
Summer's Sun chapter 1 . 11/3/2004 That's a really cool story! I loved it! _ *Starfire983* |
nathalsa chapter 1 . 10/9/2004 O.O;; OMFG *dies* t3h poor Titans! What happens what happens what happens? *begs* |
softballtitan009 chapter 1 . 8/17/2004 O! M! F! G! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Titan009 |
TamerTerra chapter 1 . 8/8/2004 *sweatdrops* Y'know, she's right... |
Rini Suichi chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 Your not going to continue? This would make a great story! Oh well, It was a great one shot anyway. _ |
Instant Coffee chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 Oh! Nice! _ I liked it loads! Few grammar mishaps...who *doesn't* make 'em? :P. I loved where you went with this though. I was thinking how great it'd be if you had put some clues in in the beginning, such as the way Jinx talks with her lil' "luck" aphorisms and such, but I can understand why you didn't do it...the girl was in disguise. Perhaps you could've detailed into the mask she wore a little bit? I dunno...point is, I still like it the way it is...and you did a good load of work for only 854 words! Job well done! _ |
Change-Of-Heart2 chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 Nice one! _ |
Animegoil chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 ...Yeah. Surprise surprise. And the whole trust talk thing made me think whoever this was was a good person. A! Not Jinx! Don't they see? Raven, how coudl you? OOh, you know what'd be good, if you continued this story, but made it so that Jinx thinks she's fooling the Titans and getting all this information to Slade, when in truth, they knew all along and the info was all fake, and in the end THEY find her weakness and beat her once and for all. |
RavenxWill chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 JINX! Wasn't excpecting that Homestar chapter 5 up! |
fiddler jones chapter 1 . 8/6/2004 i imagined it... :)... good story! i liked it! |