Reviews for Then Fate Stepped In |
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![]() ![]() Aww, So sad that their leaving hogwarts! :( |
![]() ![]() great final chapter..but so sad! :'( its better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore is the best easily. Keep writing always, Leon |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter, i love mrs potter, but technically that would be 'anticipation' since foreshadowing indicates a bad thing is going to happen, yeah i'm a college english major who will go go grad school next year, why are you reading fanfiction you ask idk good question, i'm enjoying it anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story it is so well written, I can't wait to read the rest of it! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter although didn't the snape incident happen at the end of 6th |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute and completely embarassing convo lol |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ur story is absolutly amazing! i wish u had done the chapters in between 42 and 44, but the ending was still amazing! ) u rock! ~jj~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one of the best fics I have ever read. I feel like I felt when I watched the Incredible journey of mary byrant, and i was a blibbering mess. I'm not actually blibbering now because my mother is sitting five feet away so it may look a bit strange 'There, there, don't get so upset with your desktop background, it can be changed' but if she wans't i would be. That was really good. I was really sad when Tave died espeically and then the last two paragraphs or so just had me so sad... it really is a sad tale. I understood why you gave it away and posted the last little bit only. It gets difficult sometimes juggling things. I suck at :) I end up putting writing before my homework and as I'm going into an important year academically wise that's not the best thing. But anyway, good job, my heart feels like it's been pulled out and trampled on. Very touching. Good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one of the best L/J stories I've ever read. It' a shame that it's not to be finished, but it's understandable. Fabulous chapter to end a fabulous story D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greetings Prongs' Princess! I have to say that was a wonderful Lily and James story! It sounds just like what may have happened to them. I truly enjoyed reading it and hope that you will write more stories. You are an excellent writer. Keep up the good work, and if you have time, be sure to read and review my HP story as well. -Carl |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi, how are u? happy new year... well, I've always loved this fic! It's one of my favorites, so for me is sad that is over, but things are always over... I completely untestand your reasons for end the fic now, and I thank you for update the last chapter... I really liked the last one... and I hope that you don't stop writting because I think you have a lot of talent... So, see you 'round... Niniel |