*glee* Sex-incarnate!Otto! This needs continued, my friend.

That...was...different.

Can't wait for Chapter 2!

L.L.

Mwhahahaha! God that is too funny! I wouldn't mind doing that. :o Did I say that? Well, er-eh-heh... I liked your story!

please keep going!

I loved it. I could just imagine the look on MJ's face. Hope you do more! Great work and keep it up.

(call me K9)

*chuckle* That was kinda funney. But I was worried it would be a bit...gross. But thankfully I was wrong.

do more, plase do more. i like where this is going.

Bwahha... That wasn't bad! Although, if he felt that touch, imagine how much smashing something would hurt... 0o ouchies...

-Shir-ran

SNERK. Mary Jane was right, that IS just plain wrong. *lmao* You somehow managed to make Ock like sex incarnate, though! (Was that intentional?) And I kept seeing all these phallic references that had me cracking up like you wouldn't believe. Nice. :D

The Spider-Man category can be found under Comics - the comics have been around for years! And before you protest, the aforementioned category contains loads of film fanfiction, not just comic.

Please move this story before I report it for being in the wrong place. And next time, look in ALL the sections for the fandom you want before posting the fic in a random category.

This was SO good! Your descriptions of the arms are excellent and very detailed. The characters are great too. I can clearly see and hear in my head every word of action or dialogue. I always thought Ock was ultra badass, but you made him even more so. I wouldn't mind seeing it continued, even if it meant MJ ending up as Doc Ock's moll or something like that. Thanks for a truly enjoyable Spider-Man 2 fanfic!