yay you made #2. now you must make a 3rd one or i will send momiji to your house to sing his song to you.

It’s been a long time, since your second chapter. Regardless of it being short or what not, at least you’re trying. Don’t let others get to you with their cruel comments. I have faith in you that you’ll accomplish your goal, once you put your mind to it. Of course, you’re not the only one trying to put this into a novel, but I still look forward to seeing how you view this FFVII game. Please, continue this soon! Don’t hesitate to add more chapters, even if they’re short…it’s about the quality, not the length that counts.

I read the review that u were talking about on the guild and I realized that it's my fault that the chapter's so short! (it's not that short, just letting you know-remember the first chapters of the time turner?)

Anyways, I am happy to say that as of this moment in time I am NOT completely confused! *applauding in the background* yay!

Lyra

Oh dear, we wait a very long time for the next chapter and thats all you wrote? Come on, thats pretty unimpressive

Good start! Keep going and writing more, and the more you write the better you'll get. Good description and setting the mood. As my old english teacher used to say, beware of cliches.

Great job! Keep writing!

i liked it it was very well done _ keep up the good work. i want more!

So very confused...so confused...

But I guess I'm supposed to be confused, eh?

cu!

Lyra

You know lots of people write FF7 into a novel, but I think this the best one I've read so far. I hope you continue very soon.

This is a great idea, I will be checking back daily to see how this turns out (yes, I have completed the game..so that was a stupid thing to say, lol) but anyway, please add more chapters quickly...please?

PS. I dont have ny views on the games turn-out, I just love the game!

I love the sound of an FF7 novelisation. I love the game! Please keep it up. I'd love to see your take on the story!

That was a nice beginning to FFVII, you described it quite well.

Lol, just so you know, it's gonna take a long time to finish a novelisation for this game. :p

Nice start, although short i see you aren't stupid, it was a nice prologue. Ill read on and see if you can keep up your consistency with a long chapter. Good work !