*sniff* beautifully written _

Ooh, I'm going to cry. Very sad. One of the more moving stories I've read in a while.

I hope it wouldn't be the ending. I hope you would write another chapter or a sequel. I want to know the others' reaction to Kazuma's death and what they think about Kyou right now. Cause I believe Kazuma's death would devaste Kyou so much. He needs time to let go. Good story really. You make me cried when reading the good bye scent between them.

*sobs*

I am unconsolable... this story has gotten me by the balls dude!

I mean, the relation between the characters is SO AWESOME and i swear that i had tears pricking in my eyes by the last line!

you are just awesome!

great job!

Oh, I loved this. Yes, I think it add's to Kyo's character. Will you write a sequel?

this story is awesome! I was really sad, and I almost wished he would not die, but it is fine this utterly beatiful too.

Great talent

I really liked this. It’s very touching and all most has a sad light to it. Very nice and excellent writing.