Reviews for I Will Never Let You Leave Me
Tallygrl chapter 23 . 6/25
You are an amazing writer!
I could not get enough of your wonderful story.
Thank you!
Emmola07 chapter 23 . 4/24
When I say this I’m not kidding: this is the ONLY fan fiction that got me crying,laughing,screaming,and smiling all at once. The only fan fiction that got me dreaming about the story. It made me feel l8ke I was inside the story. You didn’t absolutely copy the story J.K. Rowling wrote and added details...you created a world of your own. I really appreciate what you’ve done! Can’t believe it... I’m so sad that I’ve just finished the story but thank you for giving me the opportunity to start and finish it by inventing and writing this masterpiece! Your amazing. Lots of love...Emma.
JDH1080 chapter 23 . 7/26/2018
Finally got to the end. Over a this story was good. I felt the whole Voldemort return bit to be uneeded and the story didn't go the way I would have liked (the ending obviously is what any d/g fan would want and I did enjoy that.) But it wasn't bad.
JDH1080 chapter 16 . 7/26/2018
Oh god talk about jumping the ship. What the hell? What happened to this story about Ginny being abused by Harry and recovering? What is this crap with prophesies and destiny? It feels so glaringly out of place after everything that has happened prior. Also it's pretty obvious who Harry polyjuiced potioned as. (Unless this is a red haring and it's actually someone else. In which case I'm sorry but it's not that clever.)

Ugh I'm disappointed with this story now. Everything was so good up until after Hermione had the baby. I figured that what would happen next would be focusing on Ginny making strides to recover from her abuse and Draco and hers relationship/friendship developing further. Maybe her learning more about him and the things he and his mother endured and him being more accepted by the Weasley clan. Maybe in form of some opposition we see Harry try to work his way back in and try to forcibly take Ginny back. Perhaps she'd do a better job of defending herself now that she's learned a bit of a lesson and wants to work on being independent.

Instead we have Voldemort coming back. (wtf?) Talk of some complicated prophecy that involves Draco and Ginny. (God why? So not needed for them to potentially end up together.) And a dark ritual performed by their fathers so they wouldn't end up together. (Honestly I skimmed past the whole thing.)

I know this review is very negative. I'm sure that years ago when you reseased this chapter you received a lot of positive feedback. (Hell maybe you had a couple people who had issue with the sudden out of left field change of tone.) But this feels wholely different than the story was meant to be. (Maybe you planned to do this from the beginning, but it's still doesn't feel like a good natural shift, and honestly I don't thing there would be a good way to Transition into this.)

Either way this review has become long winded enough. I'm going to keep trying to get through this, may I'll be surprised and this will actually keep my interest. Because the story has been good up to this point. The writing (ofther than a few glitches here and there) has been good. The characters have been good, and the interactions.
JDH1080 chapter 7 . 7/25/2018
So far I am really enjoying this story. The interactions between characters have been really good and I like the nice slow pace you've got going so far.

I will admit while I don't like the characterization of Harry in this I feel it's necessary. And in a way it's not exactly impossible that Harry could have turned out like this, since people who have been abused are capable of doing the same thing.

Either way really enjoying this so far and will continue to read
hatebelow chapter 21 . 7/7/2018
Harry being Tom blew my mind the first time I read this and still does to this day. I love the idea of draco being her unassuming rescuer not once but twice. Fits from the battle then from her marriage. Love this.
Willowth'Wisp chapter 1 . 6/14/2018
Hello! Your story is well-written, emotional, and intriguing. I love it a lot! I do have to say that I think Harry beating Ginny is highly unrealistic and OOC, but I also know that as a writer (either of fanfiction or just in general!), you are perfectly within your right to explore! And this story is one of my favorites, no matter how much I wish Harry was not portrayed as the villain. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 23 . 12/26/2016
Great fic! Congrats!
Guest chapter 13 . 12/2/2016
Is it aunt eloise?
ARZ chapter 23 . 11/7/2016
I'm so happy because this is the first fanfic about drink that I read that Ron got a good character
ARZ chapter 23 . 11/7/2016
OMG this story is basically good but some of the plot I don't understand so much thank you️
Guest chapter 13 . 10/20/2016
Im gonna guess its either michael corner or dean thomas
gruen chapter 23 . 11/8/2015
This was intriguing, and quite fun to read. It could do with some editing, but it becomes easy to skip over problems after a bit, and is worth there effort. Thank you for writing!
Pierrina chapter 23 . 6/9/2015
Your story was amazing! From the beggining until the end! I was really touched by the ending too. Excellent!
ria chapter 23 . 4/11/2015
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