lol v gd well dun not much else to say but gd storyline

My friend says: I thought that it was good but the ending was totally unrealistic. I say: Hm...I have no idea about half the characters...It was OK...

Your story was okay. You had some spelling errors, like, "auddience," as well as grammar errors. But other then that, your story was pretty good.

This was...not bad...it could have been a lot better but it was still fairly entertaining and the ending was hilarious so all in all it's not a bad little fic. 7/10

Eh...ok...kinda rushed.

Stuart Bondek: i never seem to get any girls

me: Not true Stuart

Stuart: You! You are sexy!

me: You're my favorite but how would you rate that fic

Stuart: i rate the fic

Carter: It sucked

Stuart: it did not. As I was saying, Mike would of been a better choice than that jerk.

me: i rate this story..

Stuart: oh yah! I rate it 6/10 stars.

Catlin: hey Stuart seen charlie?

Stuart: He's with Carter and James.

Good premise... needs more details, maybe more contestants too. A little too fast,

but has a good story.