great so far

I loved it so...much I can't wait to read more update ASAP!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i like her legs? haha that was seriously awesome.

though, i sort've took issue witht he 2mo. lapse in time. actually, not even the lapse, but what happened during the lapse that would make it normal and expexted for them to vacation together, you know? they're practically strangers and he did her a favor?

you oculd probably solve this with rory or tristan saying "hey, do you remember a month ago when..." and establish some sort of growth between the two of them, or with flashbacks.

good chapter, i agree, but TOO SHORT!

i like this, but these two lines were a little heavy handed, so they weren't that believable, and a little too sentimental: "gathered her broken pieces in his arms."

and “Sometimes, that’s the mystery of life.”

I mean come on, you seem like a pretty good writer from what i've read thus far; even you have to know thats a little lame.

what tristan is doing is called pro-bono work.

Wow...I just read this and I really liked it...are you gonna finish it? :) I'm gonna go read your other fics now... :)

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

HOW DO U OWN CHARACTERS

Please update!

I like it. Its good. So please update!

love it!just started reading it and its great... u better update soon...or else haha jk but rly update cuz im impatient and dont like to wait long yea neway great story!

This is such a great fic. I really like it.

arg! no stopping! that's evil! this is good and i want more :) hehe.

nicely done

-elle