AWESOME! I love your writing and your stories! :)

I love this story! It's so adorable!

HAHAHA oh man this was hilarious! I loved how it wasn't just the typical "What am I thinking? I don't LIKE her" one liner, and then everything is just dialogue. Your one shot gives a bit more introspect into Ryou, and I absolutely love it! Thank you so much for writing!

Take care,

~LGT

(Half-hearted chuckle) At first, I really felt good reading this story, but after checking out some reviews, I wanted to do that infamous "oh you are so irritating" look. (Not at you, of course, Dear Author).

Before I start my critics on the story, I'll first calmly voice out my opinion about these reviews, regardless if the poster still think the same. (Really, are you not ashame of yourselves flaming stories as you wish?)

~Re: The very first poster - Nameless.

"Yeah, it's not like Renamon exists or anything or that Ruki's capable of kicking ** by DROPPING the grocery bag. Nope, she's just a helpless little wimp without the big strong Man to protect her. Whatever."

Reply: Did you read the story PROPERLY? This is in Akiyama's POV. That means, he thinks HIS way. I bet if he ACTUALLY spoke his mind IN FRONT OF Rika(Ruki), she'd really give him a whoopin'. She IS an independant girl. He just thinks otherwise. Call it protective and inassurance.

~Re: Cloaked Fox

"If Ryou truly cared about her, as a *person* and not just a helpless damsel in distress, he would not think of her as just someone to rescue."

Reply: Answer me. Will you risk your OWN life to save someone you DON'T care for? OVER and OVER again? Did you like, watch the series, actually? He saved her not only once, but TWICE.

"The best epilogue to this story would be Ruki telling Ryou to scram, because she and Renamon are perfectly fine on their own. And the next day, the news report has a piece on how the famous Tamer Makino Ruki and her partner Digimon captured a mugger who was *stupid* enough to try and bother them."

Reply: Go write your own fanfic then. (Sticks out tongue)

"And the screeching, cooing hysterical fans actually think this is *romantic*."

Reply: One-sided romance. From Ryo to Rika(Ruki). Most (young and naive) girls think that a boy protecting a girl on her way home is romantic. (However, I believe Rika would be really annoyed if she found out Ryo's been stalking her home, lol, IF she still had her Renamon, of course)

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And now. The critics.

Frankly, there aren't any. (Grins) I'll just read some of your other stories to check if there are anything I can pinpoint on. (Smirks) A'ight. Keep writing!

This was so cute and funny. xD Great story! :D

XD That was BRILLIANT! XDD You rock! Ryuki forever~ XD *is gonna be laughing all night* XD

Hilarious. Love the part at the end when Ryo gets it.

That was so good. Still making me laugh.

That was so funny. I was laughing so hard that I cried.

Kyaa! I love all yr ryuki fics! U should write more! *hint hint* *nudge nudge*

lol. love the ending.

i was cracking up like crazy! lol. i love poking fun at Ryo too! lol!

E, I totally loved! Ah, I love Ryuki ) Just got into it a little while ago, after i stopped obsessing about Taiora ;)

Hope you write more like this!

I LOVED reading that. xD

I've never seen Digimon or whatever, but yeah. XD;

It was so funny. ;]

Ryo defintely is not ruled by hormones... This story is classic.