hey, that was great!please finish the story!

The problem with Harry's questions is that they dont touch on anything secret at all.

The Dementors would be open knowledge within the ministry to the aurors if not the general wizarding population. The escape of prisoners as well, as they would have to warn the wazarding population. Percy being MoM would be general knowledge, if it upsets Molly so much they could leave the room.

I'd think Harry has a right to know that his Aunt is a squib even if not, its hardly an Order secret, so they were trying to keep harry ignorant, just to keep him ignorant. At what point were they going to tell him.

I'm surprised that Harry hasn't just asked "Now tell me the rest of it." without being specific so he learns as much as possible.

Ok, you havent posted in who knows how long... BUT YOU MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST! Even if HBP is out. I DONT REALLY CARE, In chapter ten you said 55 chapters, what hapened to the last 34! Its such a good story, and interprets hp, so good. I LUV IT! J.K couldnt have done it better herself. POST IF U LUV UR REVIEWERS

please * puppy dog face *

well im begging

bibi

post asap

N.K

it doesn't make any sense that harry would get in that much trouble for the patronous when he'd already done a stupefy at mrs. figg's.

ths is a cool story please update

brilliant story...brilliant chapter i love this..now that im on my summer holidays i have more time to read it..i loved the fight...but in reality i think harry would kill malfoy in an instant and malfoy wouldnt be able to touch him...brilliant fight all the same good action..i love the way things are going with harry and hermione...you are a very talented writer and i think u should consider doing it as a profession,

yours sincerely,

Chris

Well the H/Hr story was just getting going. and you have not updated latly. Hope you get an update soon. I know school work is very important, but lets see a new chapter. I a very good fic so far lets see how it ends.

Be happy, for I now can give you reviews on as well as on Portkey, if you so desire, for I have actually joined so as to post my story here too.

Now, onward to the review!

The story has an almost ethereal quality to it. It almost mimics JKR's style, but is departed enough that it is a fresh look at the world of harry potter.

Patty Patty Jam Jam

I love this story. Mark and Christine remind me a lot of Harry and Hermione only Christine is a lot more outspoken than Hermione used to be in her first year. Keep updating!

3 words: I LIKE IT...

hehehe...hopefully some hhr moment coming up in the next installment.]

Hola,... bueno espero que puedas entender algo de español, porque yo en ingles soy algo mala.. jejejeje,.. pero eso fue lo de menos cuando leí tu historia, la cual me parece excelente!,... para traducirla he tenido que recurrir a traductores e ir descifrando porque como te digo no se me da muy bien el ingles,...jejejeje,... me lo he leído casi de porrazo, los tengo todos los capítulos imprimidos,... y por favor,... porfis,... continúala!... no demores muchos okis... bueno gran saludo, desde Perú!

I think that with all of Harry's new training and such, he should easily beat Malfoy. If Harry is to be portrayed as having a chance of beating Voldemort in the future, he should deffinately be able to beat a school yard rival.

A nice, lengthy chapter. What great fun! I'm a bit disappointed at the duel - not the way you wrote it, just the outcome. Not that I want Harry to win, but that I was rooting for him. Arg, I'm kinda twisting up my words. Oh well, good job on this chapter. Hope to see you soon.

BRILLIANT! and second post asap! AND that thing mr. weasley said was from Spiderman 2 said by Peter Parker/Spiderman/Tobey McGuarie to Harry Osbourne/and i forget his name...lol POST SOON PLZ!

Good chapter, thanks for writing.