Actually, I think you're doing really well. And if this is about not knowing the names of the priests/priestess, then I'll just state them right here

Isis: priestess of the millenium tauk
Karim: priest of the millenium scales
Mahaad: priest of the millenium ring
Shada: priest of the millenium ankh (later)

So now you have no reason to question your capabilty as YGO fanfiction writer.

Dear ohkami majin,

Why is there a big tree in the middle of the desert?

-asdef

You sure got that right.I would love to have him as a friend.:)

Wow,you sure did your homework.I love reading about ancient egypt,:)

Good chapter.:)

please update

Atemu is going to be the youngest ruler in all of history! poor boy. i hate Akundin. update again soon, 'k? _

~AnimeFeline

Oh, I like this fic... please update soon?

ah hwa a..a wa! *cries like a fool*. *sinff* That was EVER so sad... POOR ATEMU! Well, I trust in his ability to rule. I mean, look at him when he's with Yugi. He's a ruleing machien. I know I didn't spell that right. but OH WELL! I hope you continue this, it's very interseting, I don't think I know of any other 'atemu's childhood' stories.

It's good, but I advise you get a beta. You spelled several things wrong. If you can't find one, I'm willing and able.

*sniff* poor Atemu. it was beautifully written though, i almost cried!

yay for jou _ lol

lol, showing off to seito _ that was funny.

cool ka monster! _

cute kuriboh _ and bless little Atemu crying!