Reviews for Hidden Flames
DredgenVale chapter 16 . 8/30/2017
Okay Fuuuuuddddge again but I'm reviewing on this chapter because ignore everything before from me I apparently skimmed right over the AN and didn't catch that that was the end and there's a sequel. KILL ME I'm so stupid... Sorry 'bout that. *slaps forehead*
DredgenVale chapter 17 . 8/30/2017
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDGCICLES. Nooo. I thought this was finished. I'll just calmly wait for the next chapter then...
Anyway, this is amazing! :D It's got a million funny bits, although there is far too much drama... Well, I suppose I should have expected it. I just generally don't like arguments all that much, I think... Well, in the words of Joss Whedon, "Make it dark, make it grim, and for the love of God make a joke." So...a few more funny bits with the dark stuff would be awesome. Not that you need to do that, of course. And also I'll admit I skipped a few parts because they were potentially horrifically embarrassing for some party or another, and then again, I don't like that kind of stuff. Still, I'm here for the giggles and the happy parts! Hopefully all of this drama is resolved soon. Although maybe Faye just needs a bit of appreciation for the happy?

Oh, and I love the character of Faye, you did an amazing job of it! The story seems to actually be from her POV, like her apparent good looks being completely unmentioned except by external sources (Grace), and you get an accurate view to what she thinks of herself...and others. Although that bonded thing before seemed a little too simple to have gone on that long...

Oh yeah and there was a section of the story (I think it was in the chapter where Remus is completely distraught over his lack of sleep and Sirius' obsession with Faye) where the spacing between lines isn't right. Although that is a very simple problem and I'm sure you've already heard of it and it's just a bug. Or something.

Anyway, love the story, I look forward to the next update! :D
YOUR BIGGEST FAN chapter 17 . 11/17/2014
YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!
AutumnCheer chapter 17 . 6/1/2013
Of all the Sirius/OC stories I've read, this is the best.
Ali chapter 3 . 4/26/2013
Yeah! Nice one, Faye! She should stand up to them. :)
Poppy123 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Your writing style is really good. :) I really like your stories. I think though you should make a book or something. Really. If you made a book I would totally read it. This chapter is like Jesus. It's like Mary gave birth to Jesus and Jesus got stuck into your fanfic and he- What the crap am I saying?! It's not like I'm saying or suggesting that you leave fanfic forever... I'm just saying that you could really publish a book. AND MAKE HUGE BUCKS FOR IT. But don't base it on the Harry Potter series. MAKE YOUR OWN PLOT AND CHARACTERS. You have an AMAZING TALENT. And perhaps writing fanfics could be a hobby!
StartingAtTheEnd chapter 17 . 2/4/2013
Wow. This story is incredible. I absolutely love it! and you, for being such an incredible author! I love Faye and Gloria and even Fiona. I wish Severus wouldn't have turned out to be such a butthead though. Other than that this was amazing. Could you give me the link for the picture, please?
Shy Sky chapter 17 . 1/27/2011
I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU !

THATS A LOTTA HATE!

IWAS LOYAL TO THIS STORY, I DIDN'T GIVE UP ON IT AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

when's the sequel?
haaaftsfas chapter 17 . 12/12/2010
Woah, that was fantastic! I'm telling you, I was absolutely hooked!

Now...I'm only gonna write a short review, because i wanna go read the sequel ) but thank you for writing this!
jenji chapter 17 . 12/2/2010
:O CLIFFY?
Lucy Greenhill chapter 17 . 11/14/2010
Hey! I just read your story and I totally loved it! Can't wait to read the sequel! xoxo
siriuslyjames chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
i loved it :)
pettle chapter 16 . 4/4/2010
HAHA lol AMAZING! through the whole time i was reading this fic i would break down randomly into fits of laughter! i think my family thinks that i am going off my rocker lolz! can't wait to read yours sequel... hope to find some SxF lol.
Rapunzel27 chapter 17 . 8/22/2009
woah dude! Cliffhanger! I HAVE to read the sequel! HOLY S!
battle monster chapter 5 . 3/1/2009
Wow. I love this story! It just keeps getting better and better. Great Job!
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