WHY EVIL CLIFFHANGER OF DOOM?;_; WHY?;_; Ah well still crying*blows nose* Can't wait for the next chatper;_;

T_T Sniff,dam why do I get all emotional while reading this?;_; Ugh,anyway, your story is amazing as always_ I cannot wait to read chp 9 which I am doing...right...now

Ah ,when I read a REALLY good story,I get caught in the story's emotions,making me feel upset or something!

But I somewhat like that feeling,it lets me know that this is a good story and that I'm enjoying it too the fullest_ You do a remarkable job on your writing. Kudos,Rose :3

Kya D I love this fic... The romance ish awsome Hehe D

The suspense is endearing too, driving meh up the walls X3 Oh~ It's such a great and fluffeh fic D Great job... Hope to see another chappie son D

*finally lets out breath*

This is intense. I mean, really deep. I nearly cried when their special moment was interrupted yet again and when Zelos ran off after making his accusations. I was kinda confused from the time they landed the rheards to how she got close enough for him to curl up into her. Love the cliffy. Hate the lapse in time. But, hey, can't rush the creative process, right? Anyway, I think that everyone would agree that this story should not EVER die. Forward march to the next story. Ciao,

Faye

Alright, it's official - you are the Queen of Sheelos-writing!

A beffiting title, I should say, since you coined the term Sheelos! Genious. Pure genious.

But what is the meaning of this? You haven't updated for nearly two years! Where are the next six chapters you promised us? I'll give you a really really REALLY big cookie...?

*sighs*

Well, if I cannot convince you to continue the story, perhaps I can persuade you to look over the earlier chapters? I don't mean to be harsh - I love your work! - but it was almost painful to read the first half of this fic - the grammar!

A lot of the fics I've been reading latly seem to having this problem: You were constantly changing tenses. One sentence would be in both past and present tense, not to mention every now and then switching from first- to third-person when it was supposed to be first-...

It got a lot better after you started having beta readers, but that first chapter still had notes left in it.

I do hope that you will post the next chapter, and I apologize if I was rude.

please write a new chapter to this! I really want to find out who this amaya is and what she has to do with sheena! it would be so awsome if you had a tenth chapter!im a new fan of sheelos and a big fan of your stories!.

Really unique. Very interesting. Lots of fluff and angst. A great one. Keep it up.

You haven't updated in so long. I miss this story. I've read through it again and it's still as good as I remembered it. I hope you haven't given up on it. Remember, I'll always be here to read your work, so don't stop writing! You have great talent!

...Wow. That was really GOOD. I can't wait to find out more. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I love your stories! Upsate soon!

i started reading this story ages ago... I LOVE SHEELOS! THIS STORY KICKS ASS! XD

Lovely chapter as usual, some angst too! ME LOVE ANGST. But don't forget the fluff okay? I'm looking forward to more excitement since you left a bad cliffie!

I wish i could write stories like this! Very good Continue!

Oh.. Suspense XD Awesome way to end the chapter.

I like how it's all building up, but the part about Zelos suddenly getting mad at Sheena was a bit thrown at me, it seemed really sudden.

Wow, reading this really makes me wanna write. Too bad I'm in a massive writer's block right now ._. It seems rather ironic for me to say this, but keep writing! o I hope you have fun with it XD

~Becki