This whole thing is so ridiculous, honestly. Needing to get the parents before getting the child. Infiltrating their household, being in a position to surprise attack them and then just sit and watch TV. James being guarded by a DRAGON, because obviously just knocking him unconscious somewhere or killing him isn't good enough.

The logic of your world is too far off to be enjoyable.

So he just comes home after being kidnapped and it's like it never happened. A quick hug and all is as normal. Even missed his birthday and it isn't even mentioned.

Also, they can't kill Harry Potter? What kind of bullshit logic is that? All he had to do was drive a knife through his heart. He literally had the child right there.

It's so faulty.

That was the most casual kidnapping event ever. None of them actually seemed outraged that Malfoy just walked in and took him.

Lily and James went home and slept instead of looking for him. Lily left the ministry to go home and look after the kids even though there were 3 other adults already there.

That was all very, very strange.

...ehh...

great story

Hi!,

You are writing a great story. But hurry up. I want to read when Harry goes to Hogwarts!

-le7love

u dont need to worry! i lub yur storie. good gob.

I LOVE YOUR STORYYY! lalalala!

Oooo! I love your stories!

-le7love

Hi! Your story is wonderful! But I'm kind of dissapointed (yeah yeah, I know i spelled it wrong) that Remus and Sirius didn't have a kid the same time Harry was born. Now, tell me, wouldn't that be cool?!

le7love

i liked tonks and remus together and aprils just annoying-but its funny and i like it

i think this is a very good story, as for who you should throw through the vail i think you should throw jenny so remus can end up with tonks. :D

this was a good story! i really liked it.

just 2 let u know, i am also readingrox. the only reason i didn't like that chapter was bcause april and sirius fought. so, i'm srry.

this chapter wasn't much better.

this chapter sucks. absolutly sucks. i hate it so much i almost want to stop reading. i hoped it would get better, but i was wrong. the idea is good, but i don't like how ur doing it.